All I can say is Damn...loved every minute of reading this. A A

I'm still a little in shock.

A moment of silence for Ali....::tear drops::

Now on to the story....I love a good mystery! Hopefully Logan and Ro will be on the same side of this thing ::crossing fingers::

All in All another great chapter.

Sidenote: For a second there, when Jean and Ro went off to talk. I thought they were going to have a looonnnggg over due conversation about...well you know who...or should I say you know them.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Poor Ali, I know. **sniff** Don't worry the Jean/Ororo Scott conversation will happen...eventually.

The first of my many reviews for this story. Wow....as I said in chapter 9, excellent story and very original. I just liked how this story started, in a way it was a breath of fresh air, since I was beginning to feel that all the stories had the same sort of beginning. I have to say I do like the way you start it off, with Storm definitely the key element and very in your face. She's no wall flower...and what added to this was how vital she was too the team, and that they went looking for her.

I thought the strip club thing was a bit interesting, definitely something new for 'Ro, not totally out in left field, but definitely new to see her written this way, and I love that she's in charge of the 'champagne' room.

Another interesting point that you brought up, which is an excellent analogy; and gives food for thought to the extent of 'Ro's powers is the electric socket reference when a telepath tries to force entry into her mind. It's definitely an original spin to her powers...and it does make sense. Brain waves are connected to electromagnetic power, and then added that with the mutant power to control magnetic fields because of her connection not only to the earth but also Stars and Planetary electronic fields in any galaxy...adds an invigorating twist.

I definitely hope to hear more about that and I hope you definitely delve into that..it would open the doors to a wealth of story avenues and would hopefully set the precedence of more fics touching on that.

Second piece I liked, was Wolverin's line about using the charge card for 'hotel rooms'....I got the distinct impression that was a dig at Jean---when they decide to go on their various sexual interludes away from the house. Man just becuase it's planned makes it even worse. She takes the time out to get out of the house---probably uses a mission as an excuse to have sex with Wolverine. Man there's no way that evil wench of a woman, if she could be called that, deserves Scott.

I'm one of the rooting fans against the Jean/Scott pairing, paticularly against this fanfic. He deserves better, and I'm going to get crude----her vagina needs a rest!!! This does make me wonder if Jean will be jealous of the impending Storm/Wolverine relationship--and if she'll do someting about it. It's hard to no longer be the Princess that everyone wants to screw.

Anyway great start and I love Vic as I mentioned and of course the dialogue is great---as I mentioned. I can't wait for the future chapters....

Off to chapter 2.

Author's Response: You are a woman of your word! Hot damn! :D The electrical static shock of her powers in regards to telepaths (as much as I would love to take credit) is actually well established Marvel cannon. It will come into play a bit later in the story, which is why I put it in to begin with, so, good eye. :D The hotel room comment was a dig at Jean and for that reason. Jean will indeed be jealous of the Storm Wolverine romance. Vic was a surprise addition for me. I was just writing and before I knew it I had added him in as a ex-Seal and a bouncer and it fit for me, so he stayed. :D Glad you enjoy him. He'll be around again.

I like the scene between Ororo & Logan b/c there is a scene in the movie ( X3) that reminds me of this story that you created.

Logan grabs Ororo in X3 and shoves her against the door and he is so close too her that his breath is in her face.

I think you have captured that scene beautifully in your story and I can't wait to read next chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, too bad that scene is all about Jean. *sigh*, But I do love that visual!! Thanks very much for the review!! it's appreciated!

OMG!! LOL! *fans herself*
I just escaped hell on earth where I spent the past couple of days (or was it weeks? Sheesh, can't remember...), just peeked at the Realm, and where do I find myself? In RoLo heaven full of updates and new fics! YAY!
And this one... O.M.G.! :D No words LOL. That was one hot lapdance! I'm in serious need for a shower now! A cold one :) The sun burning through my window onto my back and side isn't helping either *keeps fanning*
Totally loved the last line! LOL
Will he get his hat back? Let's see in the next chap, yay! ...like I said, heaven!

Loved it! Will there be more?

Author's Response: You betchya!

LOVED IT! infact right now i'm supposed to be filling out a form for my university loan and here i am absorbed in this story

Dont leave it too long before you update!