Aw you made Professor a crooked little man shame i really love that guy but sacrifices must me made to keep this story awesome and boy is it climbing LOVE IT and the RoLo tension Electric

Again a very well written addition. I have to say I love the length of your stories, I'm all about long and detailed accounts and I haven't mentioned but the visualizations are wicked to think about.

I have to say Storm has a heart, I'm a bit surprised she went back---ooh, just remembered. They could have harmed some of the patrons of the club and that's not something she wants to be part of, understandably.

I'm a bit surprised, we didn't get much detail not only in this chapter but in the future chapters---of Wolverine using his nose much. I realize it might take away from the visiual affect, but I had wanted to know if there was any sniffing going on between Wolverine and Vic, or a shared familiarity. Could also be what may have added to the aggression...

I wanted to mention before I forget the scene of Wolverine getting kneed in the groin. Man, as a female I even flinched when I imagined being aroused with an overly senstive appendage and then with a hard kneed on top of it. A lesser man would have died.

I also liked Storm's display of power...that was interesting how close to Wolverine and Vic she directed the blast without actually hurting them...she's obviously evovled in her skill.

I do have a question and a statement. Now I figued Xavier could be manipulative, since I have always felt he was much like Magneto on the same path with different routes. So I'm not surprised by that...but to see that even the team Leader--Scott didn't even know of his dealings but Jean did...is like a slap in the face. Or even Wolverine to be shocked and still back him up---albeit lightly. Rather annoying to see that. And I'm not sorry to say, makes me hate Ms. Grey more.

Anyway another great read and I'm off to chapter 3.

Author's Response: Vic and Wolverine sensed the feral in one another, but I didn't see that as a key element just yet, so I didn't focus on it. Thank you for bringing that to my attention. Storms powers are always evolving and she is slowly learning control. Since I am borrowing heavily from Ultimate X-Men she does not have teh percision and control that she has in 616, as it is flying is a fairly new skill for her. Jean and Xavier (especially in Ultimates) share a questionable bond. In the latest issue I read Xavier told Jean that he loved her (*gag*) and I always wondered if there wasn't more to his "attention" than mentor where she was concerned. As for Wolverine backing Xavier up, it's Logn's straightforward mentality. Xavier took him in knowing full well he was a killer and took a chance anyway. So Logan's slate is far from clean. He's not really one to question the dealings of anyone else. :D On to your nex treview...

haha totally awesome. love to be reading your stuff again.

Author's Response: Awwww *grin* Thanks!! Your reviews are always direct and to the point!! Love 'em!!

oooh i like where you're taking this. *wink*

Author's Response: LOL. To all places naughty and fun. Yep. :P

Day-ummmmmm! You packed a ton of storytelling into a relatively short chapter, kid. A nice Vic was a surprise, it's weird not seeing him even remotely psychotic or acting like a sexist boob. Yet it works. Does he eventually turn evil, or are we just dealing with Shaw as the main villain in this one?

I can't wait for more.


Author's Response: Why thank you. :D Vic is a pleasant surprise isn't he. As for what develops...you'll just have to read and find out, now won't you. :p More soon and thanks so much for the kind words and review!!

First of all, I love Vic here (and everywhere else for that matter LOL). Married, soon to be a daddy, an all around good guy... that's nice for a change :)
As for the other things that have just been revealed... omg! Xavier is stealing money, Jean knew and didn't bother to fill in the others, Ro ran off with a million bucks... Soooo cool! :D
And I'm totally loving Ro for keeping the Stetson LOL

This new fic of yours really is something, heh. Light and fresh and fun as hell. And on top of it it's RoLo! :D

Author's Response: Aw, hey girl! Welcome back!! I'm glad you're liking this because it is indeed light and fun. I like humor and I decided to have a little fun. More soon, and thanks for the review. You know I love ya for it!

And she still has the hat! This story is something else,Ororo is a stripper,Victor is the good guy,Logan is an ass and Charles is a crook! I can't wai to see where the heck this is going and just how Logan gets his hat back.

Author's Response: LOL. Yeah, I'd like to know how he plans on getting that hat back too... I appreciate the warm words and encouragement! I wanted to have some fun with this and I'm glad I'm not the only one.

Really enjoyed it. Did I sense a hint of a jealous Jean? Can't wait to see more RoLo action!

Author's Response: Jean is a wee bit jealous. But then again, who wouldn't be? Ro rocks--out loud. :D More RoLo soon. :D Thanks for teh review!!