[Report This]Date: 04-06-14 - 10:18 pm Title: Shipmates
Now that,thats how you ended a chapter Hot memorable and rushing to the next update
[Report This]Date: 08-04-06 - 01:34 am Title: Shipmates
Well, I'm back trying to catch up with all the great stories here. This is one of my favorites at the Realm so it was good to come back to it. I forgot I read this chapter months ago, sent it to myself at work and didn't get a chance to review. Of course this was an excellent chapter. You're a very talented writer that never fails to keep interest with your intriguing plots and great characterization. I'm looking forward to the next few days. Shall send the chapters to myself so I can read them at work.
[Report This]Date: 07-06-06 - 04:50 am Title: Shipmates
Again, fantastic addition. ooh..Xavier and Jean. I know you tried to make Jean lovable or at least tolerable and relatable in this chapter, I personally still choose to hate her.
She's definitely one of those changelings that changes faces due to emotion. So I won't grow to like her in this story. But the writing was great for Storm.
It's cool to see Fury getting a job to do. I never knew him as such a ladder-climber, but one must do what one must. Great to mention Storm being the only mutant to control the weather. So far Wolverine and Vic have healing ability and definitely the feral.
By the way i wanted to mention from the last chapter, much praise too see Storm calming and having that ability to even calm Vic's feral nature. Surprised Wolvie didn't pick up on that. Another moment I liked..and hoping in later chapers we see was Wolvie's mention of his hat, I'll assumed he sniffed it. I just haven't seen him using his nose much.
Back to Storms ability..I'm getting the distinct feeling that Storm's abilities are definitely are going to play a crazy role not only in this fic but also it's sequel. And I can't wait.
I wonder how Storms' powers unsettled the Storm when Wolverine kissed her. Since you've written the latest chapters..mentioning this as a question. Did her feelings for Wolverine in that carrier, have an affect on the hurricane?!
Anyway it was a great read and off to read and hopefully review 9. A bit sleepy now, if I don't get to it tonight will do tomorrow.
Keep on writing..this is fantastic to read!
Author's Response: The hat. The infamous hat is not forgotten. ;) As for Storm's powers, I had hoped to be subtle in showing that when she was getting flusteredby Logan the storm was getting stronger. I didn't want to be blatant about it, as I enjoy interpretting fiction as much as having a story narrated. But once again you caught it, so I'm happy. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06-01-06 - 10:53 pm Title: Shipmates
: )...im i luv wit a stripper (she rockin she rollin, she rollin. she climin that poll) im in luv wit a stripper .she hangin she playin she playin. im not goin no were girl im stayin. LOLOLOLOL sry i couldnt help it. logan just mad cas he wants her over to his crib to do that night thang! UPDATE
Author's Response: LMAO, this review was so fun! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06-01-06 - 04:10 pm Title: Shipmates
DAM CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
Author's Response: It's up. Thanks for the review. :D
[Report This]Date: 05-27-06 - 04:38 am Title: Shipmates
*fans self*
LOL, those two! Just like kids, daring each other but I loves it! And I absolutely love that she bit him.
And I really wanna know what Xavier and Fury are up to. Me thinks they want more from 'Ro than just clearing up a hurricane.
Love the update :)
[Report This]Date: 05-25-06 - 09:57 pm Title: Shipmates
damn good. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I appreciate the compliment! More soon.
[Report This]Date: 05-25-06 - 12:26 am Title: Shipmates
DAAANNNGGGG...me likey.
You have a way of having these two show each other who's boss, especially the first kiss. Brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. Can't wait to see how you write that storm and see how Logan reacts to seeing her in her element.
Author's Response: A compliment from you my dear is taken straight to heart. :D So thank you very, very much. More soon, and I sooooo appreciate you being a constant reviewer. I appreciate feedback, especially from fellow authors!
[Report This]Date: 05-24-06 - 11:43 pm Title: Shipmates
AHHH! So fierce and hott! That's the way I like my helpings of RoLo! Oh please continue and don't let this story lose ANY of it's intensity! Good work!
Author's Response: Hope to keep the intensity and fun level up for this one!! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05-24-06 - 08:17 pm Title: Shipmates
You're every bit of a minx as she is! I can't believe you finnaly updated! I really like he interection between Ro and and teh othe charcaters. She's an X-men she knows it but she's fighting it. I like the angle it gives her character. I can't wait for another update!
[Report This]Date: 05-24-06 - 08:10 pm Title: Shipmates
"Too bad he had to talk" LOL LOL!!! Striperella, LOL. I'm still smiling at that one :)
Killer? OMG! :D I knew he was turned on by that the moment she wispered it into his ear!
I'm so in love wih this story! Love the banter between them! Loved Scott's remark about Ro's clothes. Loved the growl that followed, heh :D And I'm glad to see Jean like this, a friend :)
About that über-hot kiss... Gawd, damn that stupid hurricane for getting in the way!
More, more, more!!! Pleeeeeaase :)
[Report This]Date: 05-24-06 - 03:32 pm Title: Shipmates
hawt ;)
Author's Response: Thawnks ;) :P
[Report This]Date: 05-24-06 - 02:51 pm Title: Shipmates
will there be other? i cannot wait for the story!!! it is good becasue i never imange her as a stripper! thanks
[Report This]Date: 05-24-06 - 11:56 am Title: Shipmates
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO **hoots and hollers**
does that mean you won't be getting any writing done this weekend? **half smirk, half pout**
Author's Response: Everyone can blame you for my lack of updates!! :P
[Report This]Date: 05-24-06 - 11:30 am Title: Shipmates
I got a happy surprise this morning when I saw this update. Yay! Love me some RoLo! Can't wait until they have an "uninterrupted" moment. Update soon please!
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