"Her black and yellow slicker was shredded, billowing behind her like a cape and her long white tresses whipped around her head like a banner of victory. With her arms spread wide and eyes glowing white she reminded him of the pagan goddesses of old. A figure worthy of worship and adoration."

This bit here is Perfection

THAT WAS AMAZING I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE WROTE THEM...YOU REALLY SHOULD DO THIS FOR A LIVING I FOR I WOULD BUY ALL YOUR BOOKS

Author's Response: I'll keep that in mind should I ever write my own fiction. *grin* Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment!

Hello,

I have read your entire collection of works on this website, and am an avid reader of fanfiction. I review work very rarely, and can think of only a small percentage of authors that I have actually written to or about.

Firstly, I would like to say that you have a very impressive gift in writing, and that you should try and pursue this gift to its fullest extent. As much as I loathe to say it (because I very much enjoy reading your works), I think you should convert your writing and creative energies into bigger, more substantial projects - write a novel or a screenplay, something that will make you the big bucks. I think you have the talents to do this.

On the subject of criticism: every writer has his or her faults, and there are some apparent aspects of your stories that require improvement (I hope I do not read like a snot in writing that). But, thankfully, that is what editors are for. All that truly matters in a good story are the bones - the meat and potatoes if you will - and you have excellent structure and original ideas.

I do hope that I have not come off as being strange or pushy in writing this letter, but I feel that when someone has potential, they deserve to know it. I wish you could recieve this affirmation from a source that is not quite so shady as an internet fanfiction review, but, if you have showed your talents in other aspects of writing, I suppose that you already have.

I apologize for not writing this sooner, and for inserting this rather long review into a section of your writing that has nothing whatsoever to do with what I am saying.

I do hope you will pursue literature in areas besides fanfiction.

Good luck to you and your writing,
-Caballo

Author's Response: Wow. I can't express enough how touched Iam by this. Thank you so very much, truly and from the bottom of my heart. As it is, I have not written anything aside from fanfiction, I actually only started writing last year. "Winds of Change" was my very first story--ever, and I'm still relatively new and working out my kinks. With reviewers like you, who provide such in depth and heartening feedback, my learning process is that much more rewarding and effective, so I again thank you. I do hope someday to write an original fiction, perhaps someday soon. If it ever happens and that newly aquired dream comes true for me I will no doubt be eternally thankful for the Realm, fanfiction and the reviwers that have been so encouraging. Once more, my most heartfelt appreciation for your thoughtful words. :D

Gorgeous. Worth the wait. Is there more???

The shredded slicker, her tumbling out of the sky...this is just getting so great, and I'm grinning.

Author's Response: Of course there's more, silly. :P Glad yer grinnin', darlin'.

I read this chapter right after seeing that Internet is for XXX-Men parody vido on your Group and I had the hardest time trying to separate that Logan from this one. I still hear the growly voice from the vid. When he gets a little sea sick, I picture his face going green like a cartoon character and when he has his face pressed up against the glass, I see him puffing his lips on it like a pufferfish. I think my mind got twisted from the vid. I'm still laughin my ass of as I write and listen to the vid (in the background). But in all seriousness, the chappy rocked, especially seeing 'Ro in all her powerful glory. I suddenly got a picture of 'Ro going 'Wheeeee' as she turns round and round in the middle of the hurricane. See what you did? When Jean got the psychic backlash 'whaaaapish' (stop me!) and got jealous, I was all like 'hah, take that!' Kinda still recovering from the movie. I'll take any Jean dissin', unintended or not (I know, mean, but so's what marvel did). So now that you've got this update done, can you do another chapter of KC, puuuuuurty pleeeeeeeeease?????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Raeyna!! How I have missed your wonderriffic reviews! They're like my crack, I swear. Addictive and drive my need for more--so I write, just to get them. **feed me seymour** KC is finished, finally, and an update for this is up. Also will be posting a post X3 story soon, but not until Convergence picks up steam and flow again. ;) Ps. I watch that Youtube episode daily. It's good for the soul.

YAY!!!... UPDATES! lolz... LOVE this story... *does a happy dance* LOLZ!!!.. u have NO IDEA how crazy it has been waiting for u to update. im sure Tamazi will go crazy over this too!.. lol. i love the whole backlash thing with Jean... lolz... should have knocked her out!.. (okay.. im being mean...) anyway... its great that u showed how much power Ororo has in her. i bet she's even gonna be strong enuf to save herself... right??... if not i bet Logan's gonna save her. hahaha.... PLS PLS PLS dun make me wait as long for the next update as this one okay nesh???? pls dear sis... stop killin me! LOLZ!

loved the banter between Logan and Ororo...and wow, to see her in her element like that must have been an amazing site...but geez, what a cliffhanger...got me anxiously waiting for the next chapter *hint hint* : )

Author's Response: Hint taken. :) More RoLo coming soon. Thanks for the review!! It really makes it so worth the time to write!

yes she may have died... but did she manage to stop the hurricane? i dunno why this ren=minds me of the scene in the little mermaid when eric is on a boat and the sailors are like "there's a hurricane a-coming!"

Author's Response: She's not dead, and yes the hurricane is stopped. Those are the only things I can say for certain, as I am winging this. :D LMAO @ the little mermaid reference.