[Report This]Date: 04-07-14 - 12:14 am Title: Rebellion
Hell Yeah for Rebellion RIOT! RIOT! Scott you came so close to snapping that leash til that Red thing showed up. Logan you need to realize you can have or appreciate a Diamond if you keep playing with cheap plastic
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 07:59 pm Title: Rebellion
Loving it. Write more write more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to get another update up soon.
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 07:57 pm Title: Rebellion
Wow! Missed a coupla updates and I come back to this? It's impossible for my mouth to close right now I', grinning!
Firstly, Scott, hon, come let me wrap my legs...I mean arms around you. You obviously need a good...hug, yeah. I wanna hug the daylights outta you. I am really really loving Scott. While I'm glad he isn't oblivous I'm sad he's accepting of it. He deserves so much better. I hope this Scott-Ro friendship continues, I'm loving it. He decked Wolvie eh? Go Scott!
Interesting what Lorna brough up about Jean possibly mind screwing Scott, I like it.
"Balls deep" that just slays me.
And I'm anxiously awaiting the upcoming RoLo!
Author's Response: I can not stop laughing at this review!! hug the daylights outta ya LMAO The Scott/Ro friendship was rather unexpected, as I had no intentions of it morphing into anything other than plot filler, but it has grown on its own so therefore it stays. (That and I'm reeeeaaalllyy liking Scotty-boy.) Yes, he decked Logan, no it's not the last time these two will get into it, and Lorna may be right...we'll see. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 09:39 pm Title: Rebellion
Oh my gosh! This was GREAT!!! I love the dynamics between the characters. And Scott....I didn't know he had it in him...and obviously, neither did he (smile). And Ororo is stirring up trouble....I LOVE IT!!!!
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Next update soon. Having way too much fin here. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 09:37 pm Title: Rebellion
Great update! And fun. I just couldn't sto grinning. And you showed such a nice side of Scott, one that no one really knew he had! And that punch! "He looks at her like a man possessed" wow...if other people can see it Logan really has it bad! What is his reactio to Scot'ss statement? I'm sure he heard. What about Ororo's?You just gotta have something on that next chapter! I am soo ready for some RoLo lovin'!
Author's Response: Ready for the RoLo lovin' eh? Hm, we'll see what I can do about that. :D *wicked grin*
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 06:59 pm Title: Rebellion
Aww, poor poor Scott. Come hear and sit down. Put your head rught hear...I'll make you feel better. You wont even remember the evil red bush. Muhahahahahaaaa!
YOU.MUST.UPDATE!
One more thing: Go Scotty, Go Scotty, Go Scotty, GO GO GO!
Ororo is queen of all things, loved Hank, Alex, Lorna and most def Ali.
Author's Response: LMAO. Great review!! Makes my night. Update in the works...as soon as I stop playing in photoshop. But eventually yeah. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 11:19 am Title: Rebellion
Another great chapter. I'm glad Scott knew what was going on. I couldn't stand to see him devastated by Jean and Logan's infidelity. I'm loving the growing friendship b/t 'Ro and Scott. Scott is definitely likeable/loveable in this fic. I'm glad he stood up for 'Ro too.
It was fun to see Hank, Alex and Lorna too. I love that Lorna hates Jean. I think I believe Lorna about Jean manipulating Scott's mind. Of course, Alison is always fun to see.
Logan! That's a threat I wouldn't mind being fulfilled. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Scott's not nearly as ignorant as Jean likes to believe he is. I like the friendship too, so don't expect it to evaporate upon future chapters. Whether or not Lorna is accurate where Jean is concerned...hmm..we'll see. I had fun with her, Hank and Alex too. Ali will pop in again from time to time. :D As for Logan's threat...next update in the works. *wink*
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 11:08 am Title: Rebellion
Should I be falling for Scott? Cuz I am thanks to you...and I don't think Wolvie would like that one bit! Awesome chapter i love the bonding between the two..and i cannot wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm kinda crushing on Scooter too so don't feel bad. *wink*
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 09:39 am Title: Rebellion
“He looks at you like a man in heat. He looks at her like a man possessed.”
What a perfect line. My thoughts exactly, although I've never been able to phrase them this well.
I love Dazzler. Her and 'Ro make the best dynamic duo ever. This is great.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I love Dazz too, therefore I couldn't leave her out. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 09:34 am Title: Rebellion
Damn, I never really was a big fan of Cyke, but your version of him... damn! So very, very likable if not to say hot 'n sexy :D
Nice effect Ro has on him, I hope those changes will be of permanent nature. That'll show Jean what she has in him, what she's risking with her stupid behaviour. And Logan... pfft! Arrogant jerk! Way too sexy for his own good, dammit! I cannot wait for the RoLo to come but I'd like him to suffer a tad bit more first, heh :) And I'd like to see whatever is going to happen in Ro's control, not his.
Loved when Scott punched Logan in the nose. Loved it even more when he told Jean the reason for that LOL LOL! :D OMG :D
This is sooo good!
Author's Response: Logan is way too sexy for his own good, isn't he? And that's about to be turned up a notch in the next chapter. LOL. Let's see how that works out.
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 07:56 am Title: Rebellion
That was awesome! Scott and Logan fighting over Ororo and not Jean....what a different situation. All of a sudden I'm pulling for a Ororo/Scott kiss even though RoLo must happen. Good chapter!
Author's Response: RoLo must happen, it's a natural law. ;) Buuuuuuut who's to say when. LOL. More soon.
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 07:41 am Title: Rebellion
like oh my gosh! loveing scott in this fic! he sounds totally hawt. *le sigh* if only he and lorna could go out and force jean out of the picture...
Author's Response: Scott is uber hawtness, isn't he. Watch out Logan...someone's taking your edge. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 06:41 am Title: Rebellion
There is nothing better than a good fic to enjoy over my morning coffee. And this one is just awesome.
I truly enjoy the way you write Scott. I think the comics often mishandled his character, turning him into too much of a Boy Scout. Here, you're giving him somewhat of a wilder side, while staying true to his character. It's fantastic! I very much enjoy the relationship with Storm.
And Scott knows all about Jean and Wolvie. Interesting. Poor boy is just willing to roll over and let it be. I do think that his history with Lorna has something to do with that, and that's very sad. Poor boo. Jean manipulating him? Oh, I so don't put it past her.
The "rescue" from Jean and Wolvie was great! I love that Scott decked him. I just really have loads of love for this version of Scott, which is highly unusal of me!
Oh! I love their banter, but this is the best line ever: He looks at you like a man in heat. He looks at her like a man possessed.
*drools* I really can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *grins like I won the lottery* Thanks! I am still getting over your latest WtL chapter. OMG, brilliant (yes, I know I said it before). That last line expresses very much how I see RoLo. Jean is lust, Ororo (if Marvel ever pulled its head from its ass) would be obsession. Primal and fierce. But that's why there is fanfic and delicious writers such as yourself. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 05:54 am Title: Rebellion
Mmmm...Love the Yummy Updates. I found the updated 5min. Before i left work at 1am. I printed it out to read on the train ride home. You could just imagine how excited i was at the prospect of reading 19 pages of Windrider written goodness.
So, i'm on the 2 train heading to Brooklyn, enjoying the scott and storm friendship, the Wolverine jealousy, and of course the introduced antics of Ali, when.....JEZUSFUCKDAYUMN! (Yes, i actually said/yelled/whimpered this on a crowded train at 1:30am) I found out that I'm missing the last five pages of the fic.
I search through my bag. Nothing. I search the train floor. Nothing. I started to feel the slight beginings of hyperventalation. I wanted to cry. I don't think i've ever made it home so fast from the subway station in my life when my stop finally came up.
I'm so happy Scott is developing a back bone. Poor Poor Cyke...I hope after the night out he finally shows Jean that he can drop it like its HOT. lol. I loved the last line that he said. Wolverine looking at Storm like a man possessed. Mmmm....can't wait to read the next chapter. Favorite line in this one: "Gonna Fuck ya soon". LAWD GAWD. GIVE ME MORE!!!
Okay off to bed now. *smoochies*
Author's Response: Awwwww. **hugs** I love you. Seriously. When we get married I'll shout it from the rooftops. More soon. Oh, btw, only 36 more hours!!!!! Get to it.
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 05:24 am Title: Rebellion
Awesome. Just awesome. GREAT dialogue, esp. the "Nice boys" part in Burger King.
Author's Response: Yeah, I liked that unexpected line from Scooter. Sometimes I swear they come alive in my head. I need a life...*sigh* :P
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