“What’s in the backyard?” Jean asked.

Logan’s grin was positively ferocious. “My dinner.”

Oooo i loved that bit. Finally the enevitable happen but also somethin beautiful

I can't believe I didn't read this cuz of the "incident" which you wouldn't let me forget! Bravo!!!! omg I was so stupid..this was amazing. And I want rolo but I want ro with scott too.

Man...I of course love the Storm/Scott interaction. So cute, and the pot shots are funny..the snoopy one was hilarious. I really like this progression. But man can I not hate Jean more. What is her deal...she's the one messing up the relationship, actually she messed it up. And she's crying about Scott finally making some head way, of course to have it shot to hell again, about where the relationship is...and then she suckers him back in. I think Lorna was right...she did brain wash my mine. Did some telepathic mind warp and now he doesn't know up from down. He's made to feel guilty and of course is feeling guilty and she's what?! Getting her damn cake and eating it too. I mean that little smile when she got her way with Scott..ugh!!

I'm pushing for Lorna/Scott, Lorna/Scott, Lorna/Scott!! Hopefully, you'll think their a power couple to be reckoned with. Anyway yeah..back to Scott. Shoot..At least he stood his ground with Xavier if not Jean. What a prick is X in this. Not that I don't see it, I had read the comic a few months back---Ultimate I think, where we find out the computer is like Xavier's kid..and he new it had a life and he screwed it over anyway. Yuppers, what a jackass. And the poor team following along blindly.

That's why I would like a new team...one with this Scott, Storm, Lorna, Havoc, maybe Dazzler and Wolverine as side kicks. For Scott to be reprimanded like an errant child in front of his girl and for her to chime in her two cents. Bloody hell! Scott just takes on too much flack. It's not right...he really needs some freedom...so glad he has Storm. And the comments both Jean and Xavier stated about Storm...fuckin' 'Ell she bloody risked her lives to save others...and they have the balls and audacity to question that. Where is Wolverine when you need him, although Scott did a fantastic job.

I was a bit thrown off when I saw that Wolverine bought her the dress and flowers. I figured it was him, that wasn't the surprise; it just seems out of character for him to do that to me. But it's not too out there...I'm remembering Wolvie from the comics, he was a fairly romantic guy....maybe it's the dress....that could be what threw me off. Oh and loving the Scott/Ro interaction in that scene.

And now the love scene...wowser...wowser.. Lovely, very arousing..damn it..Wolvie sure knows hot to make a woman sweat and moan, and whimper,and damn him...he's fantastic...may I request a bit of purring from Logan, or a low growl when Storm pets him...I just get a kick out of that...hearing a man purr.

----oooh one last push...Lorna/Scott...Lorna/Scott...Lorna/Scott.



Author's Response: LMAO! Lorna/Scott seems to be on your mind, Vabs. *grin* Jean is...hmm...what's the word...I can't think of any PC nice ones, so I'll stick with Selfish bitch. Buuuut, she also has heart which is what drew Scott to her in the first place. As for the mind tinkering...wait and see, although I suspect you already have a good idea where I am going with it. ;) The flowers and dress were COMPLETELY out of character for Wolverine (at least this Wolvie, 616 Wolvie is a bit of a romantic) and they were meant to be. I want him to do, feel, and say things to Storm that he would never do with anyone else. Don't expect sonnets and poetry, or even more flowers for that matter, but I wanted his attempt at saying Sorry (something he never really does) to be unexpected and unique. ;) Thanks a million for the in depth reviews. Knowing someone is paying that close of attention makes me want to be as consistent as possible.

Good chapter! Scott/Ro relationship is fantastic and respectful (Scott surprised me). Jean always thinks that they fight over her, pleeease! Where will this little tryst take Ro and Logan? They don't wanna fall in love, but I think it's too late, unless Scott (in a friendly way) or Jean (in a bitchy way) interfers. This is getting good, not that it wasn't good before! Great job and can't wait for another chapter.

Author's Response: Trust me Ro and Logan need no interferece to make their own bumpoy road, LOL, but we'll see what happens. Let's just say Scott is supportive of Ro, even though he may disagree with her decisions, and Jean will not be happy that one of her two men has mosied his way out of her pen. *wink*

LOL LOL Jean walking in on Ro's "proposal" So damn priceless :D Bwahahaha, serves her right. Feel some pain, Jeannie!
"You don't need her. You have me." ... O.M.G.! And I so absolutely HATE her for playing him like this! I really hate her now. She doesn't deserve a great guy like Scott. Not at all. I hope he finds the strength to dump her. Free himself from this crazy hold she seems to have over him.
Xavier... ugh. He's not really someone I'd like to be around actually. Threatening to just manipulate Scott's mind like it suits him... WTF?!
Logan really can be a sweety if he wants to :) Loved all the flowers, the dress and the card. Scott and Ro in her room LOL Like two girls talking serious girltalk LOL :D
Had to smile at the addition to Logan's uniform for his cigar LOL That's so Logan.
Scott standing up against Logan was great! Finally he's showing what he's made of. And Jean again, gah! The second Scott walked out on her (Yay, way to go man!) she moved over to Logan. Good thing he dismissed her as well! Damn, I so don't like her here :D
The scene in the backyard... just WOW! So damn hot! *fans herself* Mmmhhhh, that really was perfect *drools*
They both don't want to fall in love. Aww, so sweet. If they'd only know LOL

Author's Response: Wow, Steph. Thanks. Scott is a rather pleasant surprise in this fic. Jean, hmmm. I don't really know what's coming with Jean. I don't hate her, and neither does Ro or Scott or Logan, so that complicates things a bit. We'll see what happens. Hot backyard loving was fun. More soon!

OMG jean needs a bitch slap. self centered cunt much? geez.! that scotty... goddamn *drools*

Author's Response: LMFAO. Wow, uhm, yeah. Wow. **dies laughing**

Glad to see you were...busy. nice looooooong chapter. lots of good stuff.

Beautifull! Logan buying flowers and aranging them on in her room?!?! I can't blame Scott for not believing it! The Scott/Ororo interaction reminded me of two best girl friends. But the feeling of friendship and trust really camde trough. I can't beleiev Jean tried to convince the Profesor that Ororo is a bad influence over Scott! She's such a bitch. I LOVED the proposal scene! I was so laughing! As for Logan...wow! He was so...perfect, and gentle, and understanding and... HOT! I can't wait to see what you've got installed for our fave couple inside that crazy head of yours!

Author's Response: Thanks Panther!! Many ideas and lots of twists coming your way!