Date: 04-07-14 - 01:18 am Title: After Effects
AWWWWWWW A beautiful RoLo filled chap ^_^
Date: 06-20-07 - 05:02 pm Title: After Effects
So I was reading the chapter again. Besides of course loving the love scene. I do think Jean needs to die. I hate that woman so much...and she's polluting my Scott with every breathe they share (meaning as long as their both on Earth). That's why I loved Emma and Scott (and I stopped liking Emma when she got with Scott)...just because he could do better than Jean. Anything and everything but Jean. I'll even have him develop a relationship with Collosus or Wolverine just to get him away from Jean.
But really I like Polaris...I really bloody do and I like how you added her. Actually that's one of the things I love about your fics you bring back the people who were X-Men but go to the trailer park of X-Men retirees when the writers don't use them. I would love to see Scott break the bonds that Jean has put him under as she's basically admitted to Wolverine in this chapter and see Lorna as a woman who's loved him forever. Unfortunately I feel she's substituting Alex for Scott, but sometimes you have to take something as close to the "real thing". Anyway Lorna better get Scott out of the trap called Jean.
Now for Divergence you've only written a chapter, can we look to more guest appearances if not role from Polaris in that fic? Maybe some closure on Lorna/Scott (forever love). And you haven't updated in a while...I'm dieing here for Unbreakable. I love that baby. Make the baby Kendall, let me go and review those chappies so we can get your butt in gear. ^_^
Date: 08-29-06 - 11:26 am Title: After Effects
OMG, I sooooo loved everything RoLo here! :) Pure hotness!
Poor Scott, he still feels deeply for Lorna. I wonder what this will do to his relationship with Jean. Will those two get their act together again? Or is it time for a break up? Hm. I know he loves Jean but I'm not sure if that's on his own free will... I don't trust Jeannie here, not really. This might all be a big mind game on her part...
Back to RoLo! So. Very. Hot! Girl, that was just perfect. And beautiful. Loved when Ro figured it out all on her own. She really understands him. And wants him. All of him. Not only the man but also the beast.
Date: 07-25-06 - 12:42 pm Title: After Effects
ahhh! sexy he marked her yay omg more updates i can wait its like peanut butter and crack u need it!
Date: 07-24-06 - 01:55 pm Title: After Effects
aw man, 3 weeks without this stuff? i was craving and holz you delivered. great chappie. and scott/lorna? you know they have to end up together, right? :P
Date: 07-23-06 - 11:34 pm Title: After Effects
you were right. feel free to pat yourself on your back!
Date: 07-23-06 - 11:03 pm Title: After Effects
Awesome Awesome all the story awesome
Date: 07-22-06 - 06:21 pm Title: After Effects
great chapter!!! i love how it seems that jean is starting to lose the control she may have had over scott with these silly little games of hers...and the rolo scene...hot...
Date: 07-22-06 - 06:04 am Title: After Effects
MUSH TO THE MAX! that was mushier than oversoaked oreo's! dude that jean... she needs a beating. there's no way she can learn to change a la ties trilogy. lorna looks so HOT in the newest series dont she? YUM!
Date: 07-22-06 - 04:29 am Title: After Effects
*sigh* Yay, RoLo.
Teehee. Alex-Lorna-Scott-Jean. I wonder what will happen next.
This is amazing! I forgive you for the delay.
Date: 07-22-06 - 01:33 am Title: After Effects
Oh my gosh!!...this story was DEFINITELY worth the wait! Please keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07-22-06 - 12:18 am Title: After Effects
That was beautiful. I am in love with this Logan, can u make him call me. Glad Jean got told. Yar take that "the red bush"! MUST HAVE MORE!
Date: 07-21-06 - 07:31 pm Title: After Effects
DAMN THAT WAS HOT! Sizling! And yet beautifull. This is the reason i am so damn hooked on your work. Beacuse it's just perfect! I just can't find one thing wrong with it (okay except for the fact that you don't want Ali/Scott together). You know know how much i love this so update already!
Date: 07-21-06 - 07:18 pm Title: After Effects
Nice. Very nice. Yay for updates!!!
Date: 07-21-06 - 06:34 pm Title: After Effects
Okay.....I'm sweating over here and I'm not exactly sure it's from the heat.... :D . Ahh... are Ro and Logan finally getting there sh!t together..one has to pray they do.
Oh yeah, and I do love/loathe the Scooter/Jean interaction, from this chapter and the previous one.... I'm rooting for Scott to break free. ; )
It really was another exceptational chapter!