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Reviewer: Amora Lee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04-07-14 - 01:52 am Title: Now Comes the Night

Sad just sad...their paradise didnt last a day

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 11:54 am Title: Now Comes the Night

Oh wow... *is stunned* Ali's dead. Beaten to death. Aw, crap... Ro just lost her very best friend, the only person who never ever mess with her. Damn :/
At least it seems that Logan plans on being there for her. Help her through this.
Even though he's still in denyal towards his feelings he's still staying. I love his openess. Like when he told her about his job to find out about Ali. The little discussion with Ro about that didn't quite went that well, okay, but he told her. He didn't keep it a secret. And I like that a lot.
I also really, really like Scott in here! I'm glad he and Ro are so close and can talk about everything and anything.

Reviewer: Hetairai Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 01:42 am Title: Now Comes the Night

Ali's dead?! I'm a need a moment.
Sooo didn't see that coming. Damn! I'm speechless and sad :(
So Logan and Ororo gonna be doing some investigating eh? Something tells me it won't be together.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 09:01 pm Title: Now Comes the Night

And now for the sane part of my review: Hot scenes! Gotta love the chemistry between Ro & Logan! Scott is becoming "mr girlfriend" to Ororo. I mean i'd imagine Ororo having that sort of talks with her girlfriends , like Ali. Or whoomever it is depending on the story. Not atht i don't like it or anything. MORE please! Soon! How could you kill off Ali?!?!

Author's Response: LOL. Panther you're silly. Ali's death was for the greater plot. Sorry. i know, I know, you were rooting for the Scott/Ali hookup. :(

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 08:53 pm Title: Now Comes the Night

*thuder boom* HOW COULD YOU?!?! HOW COULD YOU KILL ALI!? ALI OF ALL PEOPLE! HOW DARE YOU!!!! ALI!! Not Jean. Not Lorna. Not even Emma. Noooo....You had to go and a kill Ali off! *boom* How could you?!?! You realize you...you...UGH! *yurns around and leaves*

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 06:19 pm Title: Now Comes the Night

You are pretty good at keeping me at the edge of my seat with all of your stories, but when you killed Ali, I fell off my seat. But....I understand! You're taking the story to the next level. I can't wait for the next chapter, but I will miss Ali (sniff).

Author's Response: Hahaahh fell off did ya? Yeah, I'll miss Ali too. :( **sniff** Thank you for the smile and the review!!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 05:30 pm Title: Now Comes the Night

you know i liked, but there were a few things like an error in the part where you said something about "Ali's death..." unless i was reading it wrong...

I can't believe you killed Ali. That had to hurt. that had to hurt A LOT.

Also, maybe it's because i know you, but I am beginning to not hear storm in this, but I hear you. I wonder if that made any sense. Any way, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: v-love Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 04:42 pm Title: Now Comes the Night

omg! u killed alison...update

Reviewer: v-love Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 04:34 pm Title: Now Comes the Night

omg! u killed alison...update

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 07:45 am Title: Now Comes the Night

Aw... Ali. *sigh* I love that girl.

I wish she'd do a Phoenix and come back to life somehow, but that would be too... wrong. Somehow.

Author's Response: No resurrected Ali's in this fic. Sorry. Gone but not forgotten will be the case here.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 07:21 am Title: Now Comes the Night

wait she wasn't responsible for the lightning? twilight zone bs! man oh man this next chappie should be good. sad to see her go...

Author's Response: no, Ororo wasn't responsible for the lightning that fried Anderson. That was just his shitty luck. ;)

Reviewer: KrystalNic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 06:16 am Title: Now Comes the Night

Jean.....mess with Scott's mind???!!!Will the next chapter talk about it? And if she did it to Scott, why didn't she did it to Logan too? So that she can have two great men.
Poor Ali.......would the death of Ali pull Rolo closer?


Author's Response: Logan's resistent to tekepathy (at least Ultimate verse Logan is) so she can't manip his mind.She may not have been the one in Scott's mind (bum-bum-bum) or very well could be. Who knows...? Ali's untimely demise will be the catalyst for a large portion of the story and plot. Convergence just took an unexpected turn. as for how this effects RoLo....we'll see.

Reviewer: charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 04:27 am Title: Now Comes the Night

you BASTARD!!! how could you do that!!!???!???!?!? are you CRAZY?! i mean for God's sake, show a little mercy!!

Author's Response: Uhm...**hugs freaked out charmer** Sorry.

Reviewer: Goddessreicko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 02:51 am Title: Now Comes the Night

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh, *sniff* Allliiiiii. Noooooooooooooooooooo *goes back to read KC to get my Ali fix that won't be in Convergence*

Wow, talk about a plot attack. Im uber hooked.

Yea Scott is torn about Lorna!

WHEN IS JEAN GONNA FIND OUT? Scott needs to tell her he knows about the mind manips. I so wanna be there for that. BOYOW!

What does Ororo know about all of this, did she do it? Where is Angela Lansbury when you need her?

You know after reading this chappy and the others backwards its a twist turn. I like the darker tone, but I miss the comedic lightness. Apprently Scott isn't the only one torn.

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Ali :(. But her death serves as a platform for the (as you pointed out) darker plot. As for the lightness and comedy, don't worry, there will still be plenty after a few more "intense" moments.Convergence is my fun "do whatever" story where I am letting it lead me. where it wants to. :D My mind is spiraling with many, many ideas...let's see where we go eh?

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 02:20 am Title: Now Comes the Night

Oh my goodness.

I really should be mad at you for killing off Ali, since I love her to pieces...I should be mad. I kinda am mad. But you always have tricks up your sleeves, and there was still a matter of that wonderful "start the chapter off with a bang" love scene and the chat with Scott and 'Ro that was just great.

I can't wait to see where you take this, Windy.

Author's Response: Sorry about that. Ali, as much as I love her, served no real purpose to the plot, so off she went. :( I can't wait to see where I take this either, as now I have no idea... LOL. More soon, after a Slow Burn update.

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