[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 12:48 pm Title: Desolation
Whoa, damn... I'm glad Jean let Ro see what happened. Once Ro gets the information about Mojo, that bastard is so dead.
“You wanna make your eyes stop doing that creepy glowy thing?”
“Not really.”
Loved that! :D
[Report This]Date: 08-02-06 - 04:18 am Title: Desolation
PLEASSSSSEEEEE!!!!! Windrider1 update soon like now. The danger the intreque the mystery and the suspence is killing me slowing. Damn you are amazing fasinate story teller. PLEEEASSSSEEEE UPDATE!!
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks! **blushes profusely** You rock!!
[Report This]Date: 07-29-06 - 03:23 am Title: Desolation
I'm still a little in shock.
A moment of silence for Ali....::cry drops::
Now on to the story....I love a good mystery! Hopefully Logan and Ro will be on the same side of this thing ::crossing fingers::
All in All another great chapter.
Sidenote: For a second there, when Jean and Ro went off to talk. I thought they were going to have a looonnnggg over due conversation about...well you know who...or should I say you know them.
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 07:59 pm Title: Desolation
WHOOO-HOOOO Stormy on a rampage. Logan on a hunt. MOJO is going Down, DOWWWWWWWWWWNNNNN!!!
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 06:49 pm Title: Desolation
Oh damn! Poor Ali...Poor Roro...I love teh way you manage to relay you characters feelings trough words. Very very nice chapter. Can't wait to seew aht happend next. Poor Ali. *sniffeles*
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 04:55 pm Title: Desolation
Nice, things are getting very interesting! Nice to see Ro being more assertive. I can't wait to see how she and Logan kick butt in later chapters.
Author's Response: Ro is definitely becoming more assertive, how good of a thing that is will depend on your POV. :) Thank you for the review. It's appreciated!
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 04:32 pm Title: Desolation
HEck yeah!!!!! More More!!!!!!!! Can we miraculously bring Ali back Somehow? Some rift in her "defective" Dna?? :)
Author's Response: Sorry, Ali is dead and gone *sigh* sad. I know. More soon, and as always **hugs** for teh review!
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 10:21 am Title: Desolation
Mojo and Longshot are in this too? Wow! *dances around*
'Ro is pissed. Man, I love it when that happens. Ali's funeral was tough to bite. You wrote it so well, I was starting to get depressed.
Author's Response: Yup, MoJo and Longshot. ;) Sorry to depress you, it was a sad day for me Killing Ali. :( More very soon!
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 07:32 am Title: Desolation
oooh a twist! this is like agatha christie (or is it crispy?) kind of twist. oh the love
Author's Response: LMAO. Love right back at ya!
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 06:19 am Title: Desolation
This is fantastic! I'm glad to see the story shift into a suspense-like story. I'm interested in seeing who these guys work for and what they want from Ro. Kinda sad to see the empty space form between Ro and Logan, but she's got bigger fish to fry right now. I just love this story, GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Yeah, the space growing between our RoLo is sad, but as you sad she has bigger, fatter, albino fish to fry. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 04:34 am Title: Desolation
Yay! Ro has a goal! Avenge! Avenge!!! Will Logan help?.... who knows??? :)
Author's Response: I know....LOL Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 04:00 am Title: Desolation
Ro would get more hurt this time...knowing Ali did ask for her help.....
Avenge.....during the avenge, would Logan met her???
How many chapters left actually????
By the way....when will the slow burn be updated? You did say that you would update slow burn before update convergence....
Support you~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Quite a few chapters left in this fic. Slow Burn is updated now, so I hope you enjoy it. :D It would have been done sooner, but Convergence kept coming up. Thanks for the review!! :D
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 03:46 am Title: Desolation
wow, the funeral was intense, as was the scene that ororo saw from jean's mind...i feel for whoever it is that is gonna suffer under ororo's wrath...well, not really, they deserve whatever they get...good stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks, and poor Ro. :( More coming soon, and thanks for takinng the time to review, i do love ya for it!
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 02:00 am Title: Desolation
Dang. That's something. More intense stuff, and so much different from your other stories. Second funeral I have read this week, but it was poignant and well-done. Gainee did a good job on hers, too.
Grisly death for Ali, but it fit the mood of the story; obviously it was a gangster style execution, since Mojo was kinda written like a gangster in Ultimate. Once again, you have made me like Scott. I love the bird screech comment, that was funny, plus him talking to the mustard.
Keep it coming. You know I'm a fan.
Author's Response: Gainee writes beautifully. :D I appreciate the feedback, girl, you know I do. :) I think my style is slowly evolvong, but who knows. LOL ^-^
[Report This]Date: 07-28-06 - 01:47 am Title: Desolation
INTENSE. Good lordy, woman. It's nice to see differences put aside.
I actually like the rift between Rolo, they really should work on that. It happened so fast, a little time apart will do thier bodies good, awsome job with that.
Now, I see why this story is called Convergence. More, more, MORE!
Author's Response: Thanks reicko. The rift is a good thing? You heartless bitch! **wink** No, you're right, they need to develop more on an emotional basis and not just an exchange of fluid basis. :D More coming up. Read your update, btw. Good shit. :D
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