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Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-06 - 02:30 pm Title: The Princess and the Boy

I thought It was really cute, I enjoyed the story and as always with your stories I can’t wait for the twists and surprises as you continue writing.


Author's Response: Thanks Roxxi. Don't know how many twists this fic will have. I hope not many, X-ed is taking care of all the twists I want right now. Its more of a personal/family fic than anything else.

Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-06 - 02:11 pm Title: The Princess and the Boy

To tight! I can feel the same cringe that Ororo went
through as a child. After my hair washed on a Sat
morning then a good greasing then that pulling.
But I must say their's nothing like a mother touch.
Love the tough little Ororo great story. Keep it up
update you can.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad that you (and the other reviewing readers) liked it). Will try to get an update up soon.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-06 - 11:09 am Title: The Princess and the Boy

How precious! Little Roro & James. I can only imagine them growing up together. Good start, i'm anxiously awaiting updates.

Author's Response: That's why I made a bit of a change in the ending of this chapter. Hope to get more 'kiddy' RoLo-ing done.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-06 - 05:32 am Title: The Princess and the Boy

heylo, brilliant first chapter but y did he say engagement????

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for the 'engagement' that subplot has been changed/dropped for now. Made the change while working on the next chapter. Maybe I take up later, maybe not. I made the change to avoid getting too much into angst right now. Am having enough of it in Y&T. Sorry for the change.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-27-06 - 05:04 am Title: The Princess and the Boy

Interesting beginning. What I really loved about this was seeing the scene with Ororo and her mother, since that could be every Black mother and daughter on the planet, yanking out knots, snatching hair into plaits and telling their kid to sit still so the braids don't end up crooked. My mom did it with me, and I do that with my daughter. Authentic stuff, BW. I of course also love any reference to the Superfriends and Wonder Woman, since we ALL spun around to try to make our clothes change into that costume...you hit the nail right on the head.

Keep this going.

Author's Response: Glad u liked it. As for being any Black mother and daughter, it could be any mother and daughter, or even sons. As for the WW refrence, I used to mimic Batman, Spider-man, He-Man n' Mister Spock myself, and seeing as I couldn't use any of the X-Women (or Marvel characters), WW was the only choice left (if not the first)

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