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Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter One

Like Father, like son, love of fighting in bars. Loved it!!
"What is he dying of, or is it his mutation's in his genes?" Write more soon.

Author's Response: Answer's coming up in the next chap! And I'll get to finishing it up ASAP. (Btw, the fight's in an unused loading bay. But don't you worry, he'll get around to bars soon enough)

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter One

wow...this was really good...i felt there was a lil somethin' off bout Kai, but wow, was not quite expecting that...please continue!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, he's a devil ain't he? (Did ya catch the double meanin' there? You know, he's a devil ain't... Ah never mind.) Thanks angel!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter One

Well howdy, hello and goddamn, Bard!

What a way to rekindle a story! I love the return of Xierra and the change in Kai. Glorious. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Rhap! Glad that there's at least one other person who remembers the story and characters!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-06 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter One

This is just what you described it as when we were spitballing back and forth. Kai was what I expected; you can hear Logan's cunning in his dialogue, and a bit of his ruthlessness. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Glad you picked up on the resemblence to Logan. Wanted to make it somewhat subtle, since I need to also illustrate the part of him that resembles Storm.

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