[Report This]Date: 06-09-06 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Two
This is getting really good. Logan's bond with his son, and his first bar fight with him, although he doesn't have the gene, you can still see he has parents fighting skill in his blood he's a true warrior with no fear. Like to see more soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you picked up on that. I've been trying to show the elements of both his parents. You can't compare to the fun of writing in a bar fight!
[Report This]Date: 06-09-06 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Two
She? She who? The plot thickens!!! I loved this, and I will of course be sending you emails to ask more about who is who. Kai and Logan together are a riot.
Author's Response: She. Ah, she. She's a character close to my heart, and I can't wait to get started on her!
[Report This]Date: 06-09-06 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Two
loved the bonding b/t Kai and Logan, definitely seeems like the type of environment where they'd bond...but Ororo at the end? wow, i guess i'll just have to wait and see what that's about...so in that case, plz update soon! : )
Author's Response: Not a problem angel, already dug my hands into the next chapter.
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