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Reviewer: Anon. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 05:14 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

I agree with the reviewer below me. Please don't leave us hanging about who this person it. It could be anyone. You brought out this side of Storm convincingly. That means the other person could be anyone. You're driving me crazy with the possibility.

Author's Response: I won't! I promise. :) Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0612 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 07:55 am Title: Cold Chrome Heart

I'm dying here. Who in the world is "the other". At first I thought it was Gambit, because...well because Gambit is normally the guy of choice. But then I was thinking, maybe it's Dracula. :::shrugs shoulders::: But then it hit me...and I could most certainly be wrong, but I just got this overwhelming feeling that it was Victor. Oh how I do love a good Victor/Ororo/Logan triangle. But maybe it's just my own sick twisted fantasies talking. Oh well. Fabulous as always. I feel so bad for Logan as I read this story. I can't wait to see where you take this. I only have one request. Please reveal who "the other" is. It is driving me nuts. LOL.

Author's Response: Please don't die. *gets the water of life* :D Nothing wrong with fantasies. They do a mind wonders. ;) I do plan to reveal who the other is in the last chapter. I promise I won't leave you guys hanging since I tend to do that a lot on some of my other stories. :)

Reviewer: Delia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-06 - 05:06 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

It's only just a crush it'll go away. ;) I'm not sure what to say. I can't believe Ororo would do this to Logan. It's good. It's compelling. I have to have more.

Author's Response: It's just like all the others. It'll go away. ;) I am quickly converting you all into SWR fans. Oh yes, there will be more and soon.

Reviewer: gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-06 - 07:06 am Title: Cold Chrome Heart

I just started this story today and WHOA! I love it. Its not something I've seen very often in fan fiction, but the way it's written is beautiful, sinful, and so in character it almost hurts.

I really love your style, too. You weave in enough prose to suck a reader in without beating us over the head with it. This is a truly inspiring and addictive read. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you, very much! I'm enjoying your stories, too. I've been reading them (slowly, cause there just aren't enough hours in the day). And I'll be reviewing soon. :)

Reviewer: xhollowx2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 08:38 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

So, she IS a cheater. Tsk, tsk. Once again, I felt like I was being allowed to be part of something I shouldn't. I revel for Ororo's decadent affair, because it shows a different side of her. It shows this sexual being that she is. But I'm also disappointed in her and the fact that she could hurt Logan like that. Is the affair really worth it?

Author's Response: Is it worth it? Hmm... I'll let you decide that for yourself once it's all said and done. :)

Reviewer: RFTG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 02:25 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

Will there be snacks and treats in this harem? If there are no snacks and treats, you can count me out. I don't like sharing much. Or you could just give me your iPod or a Beauty and Pain update. Then, I'll join. You girls need to lay off the VH1. :)

I think you -did- make Ororo remorseful from my reading of this chapter. She is sorry. She is experiencing self-doubt and loathing. However, for every action, there is an opposite and equal reaction. She's sorry, but she still shows an equal "want" of what's going on. I don't think Newton knew his theories were going to apply to fanfiction. That's the best way I can describe it. She does know what she's doing. The question is what is she going to do about it?

Author's Response: Well, I'll try to have a BP update out for you soon. Sir Newton would be proud that his theories apply to writing as well. It means he wins (or won) at everything!

Reviewer: S. McNasty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 10:14 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

Still didn't name the culprit. Or should I say the "other" culprit? She is painfully human in this story. Her emotions run the gamut as any person's would. She's guilty, but she enjoys it. I see a sort of "giving up" on her part. She seems to be willing to accept the fact that she probably screwed up her "true love" but instead of being in denial about it, she's taking responsibility for this mistake. However, she just seems ready to let whatever Logan and her had go to waste. Excellent work.

Author's Response: I didn't name the culprit because I had a momentary brain freeze and couldn't decide who I really wanted it to be. This story morphed from its original version and because of that I'm undecided at this point (all suggestions welcomed and encouraged). This chapter two you've read wasn't my original chapter two. And giving up...! *mumbles* Okay, I'll keep that in mind when I flesh out the next chapter. ;P

Reviewer: RnbwRvrGrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 05:55 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

Mme. Munroe agit étrange, très étrange. Elle a une maladie étrange. I think I'd rather not know who it is. I want to know, but I don't. If I know, I'll have someone else to direct the anger I feel at.

Author's Response: Yeah, okay then. Are you trying to seduce me? ;) But isn't that what you should want, Sparks? Shouldn't you want to have someone else to blame--or partly blame?

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 05:30 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

wow, loads of thinking on 'ro's part. Jeez, poor logan
aww man! i think im starting to hate ororo!

Author's Response: Yeah, that seems to be my forte. I can't write dialogue for crap, not very descriptive either, but I sure can write the psychological stuff. Awww! Don't do hate her!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 04:59 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

I love and i hate this story at the same time. And with equal passion. Ororo is so very human, and she reallyw ould hate herself in such a circumstance. But one of the reasons i love Ororo so much in the first palce is because she is fiercly loyal. She would die for the people she cared about she would die before she ever did anything to consciously hurt them. And in this story she has lost that loyaity. I almost cried for them, for Roro, for Logan and for their love. Well wherever this story goes i'll follow. Wordefully written.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that I am able to draw out such an emotional response from my readers. Though, I may have to write something light and fluffy in the future to make up for all my angst.

Reviewer: Monica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 04:05 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

I took your advice and listened to the songs you recommend while reading this. Did I ever tell you how much I love how you have reading music to go along with your fics especially since it fits so well. I think you've gotten me addicted to Nicole Blackman. Send me more! OK review. I HAVE TO KNOW WHO THIS PERSON IS! You're a tease, srsly. You're gonna make me break out the net speak. I have some ideas based on people I know you have a thing for writing her with but whenever I think I'm right 9 times out of 10 I'm usually WRONG. This was bittersweet. Her memory of Logan was sweet but she's riddled with all these guilty emotions from what she's doing. Psychological melodrama, check yes! Updates soon?

Author's Response: *checks yes* Yes! Tempest loves the head games. :) I know you want to know, Mon, but like I told Nick I actually managed to puzzle myself by rewriting and changing much of what I originally planned for the story. No worries though! I don't think...

Reviewer: BrightLady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 04:02 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

Once again it was beautiful. I love Ororo's self-loathing. She should feel that way. She's woven a path of destruction that only she can make right. My mind is racing with who "the other" could be. It's gone from Gambit to Sabretooth to Cyclops. I'm in awe of your writing style. It is extremely intelligent and real. Brilliant! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! You're right. She should. One of my worries with this chapter was I didn't convey that guilt enough. I talked it over with my close writing friend, and she told me to just keep writing it out and see where it goes, that I might surprise myself. And I was a little concern even while editing that I hadn't done enough to show that she was guilty, but everyone else seems to think otherwise.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 03:58 pm Title: Cold Chrome Heart

Your writing is so intense and intelligent and shows such intimate knowledge of the characters' inner narrative. Ororo is so human in this story that I want to reach out and shake her. Interesting that her other boyfriend is kind of sadistic, and that she's drawn to that.

This is a deep read. I will be checking this for updates.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I try to show this human aspect of them and hope it doesn't come off sound like a complete sham. I know I'm doing my job when you want to shake her. I'm already working on fleshing out my ideas for the next chapter. Hopefully, it won't take nearly two weeks to get it up.

Reviewer: Ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 02:43 pm Title: @45ºN. 180ºW.

I don't care if it's delayed, so long as it gets continued at *some* point. :D

Author's Response: Ask and ye shall receive. LOL.

Reviewer: Delia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-14-06 - 09:13 pm Title: @45ºN. 180ºW.

Once again this was soooo good that it is too much metal for one hand. mmm/

Author's Response: Thanks Delia. I loooove you, too!

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