Date: 06-10-06 - 09:37 am Title: Why she appears different
Interesting start! Short but very dark and moving. Can't wait to see where you are taking this.
Please do continue :)
Date: 06-09-06 - 02:34 pm Title: Why she appears different
an intresting read, it's a very deep and slightly disturbing story, but thats comes with every story dealing withis situation.
i also find it inresting that you chose forge, i assumed a more likly candidate would have been somone like the shadow king.
but i am intrested to see who this develops update soon!
Author's Response: I suppose you right in saying that the a more likely candidate would have been the Shadow King, however it ws forge who came into my mind as I started to write this story, as a 'he seems nice, but...'
Anyhow, thanks for your review. I'll try to keep up with updates : D
Date: 06-09-06 - 03:36 am Title: Why she appears different
i'm a little confused. her molester/rapist was charles?
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion, Forge was her child abuser/rapist, Charles is her adoptive parent.
Date: 06-09-06 - 01:52 am Title: Why she appears different
I likey! It so sad and I could picture a situation like that so easily (which is pretty sad in itself) I can't wait till Logan come and show her that touches can be good
Date: 06-08-06 - 09:25 pm Title: Why she appears different
I like this, it's sad, but a good start for a meaningful story.
Date: 06-08-06 - 09:16 pm Title: Why she appears different
This first chapter sounds really good. I would like to see where it goes. So please update A.S.A.P.
Date: 06-08-06 - 07:05 pm Title: Why she appears different
Wow. Deep and moving, for a tiny little ficlet. If you don't continue this as a long story, then perhaps write a follow-up to it. Interesting to see Forge portrayed as someone who abused her, as opposed to just hurting her through the usual relationship drama. I hope you continue this, somehow.
Date: 06-08-06 - 06:37 pm Title: Why she appears different
Disturbing, but keep going
Date: 06-08-06 - 04:51 pm Title: Why she appears different
Whoa! this deep. Great frist chapter please continue, I
like to know how this turns out.