I sooooo loved the scene with Ro and Logan in her room. The massage, the talking, the kiss... just everything about that scene was perfect. Wish it was longer though, but what else do you expect from a RoLo-addict LOL Can't wait for the RoLo to continue ;)
I hope Ro and Kitty will be able to work things out soon. They really give each other a hard time. And what does Peter think about Kitty being with Doug all the time? That can't be easy for him either.
I just have to get back to the RoLo scene LOL That was just soooo perfect! :D Loved it, totally loved it!

Author's Response: Ro and Kitten didn't really argue much in the original story, but the thought occurred to me, they would have in real life, in a situation like theirs, where Kitty was locked into a certain mindset of thinking of 'Ro as her mother, and feeling like she deserted her like her own parents did when they divorced. In the original, Peter and Kitty never really discussed her friendship with Doug on-panel, but Peter was chopping down a tree with his one good arm and complaining to Logan about Douglas. The next we saw of Pete and Kitty together was them breaking up after Secret Wars. Marvel missed a good opportunity to deconstruct their relationship more before they chucked it, I think. Thanks for reviewing. I get a kick out of your feedback, it's always constructive and fun!

I just love how you have Ro and Logan interact. The scene in her room was beautiful. But after the kiss when he was leaving, I just wanted him to turn around, go back to her, and finish it. Like, seriously, they need to get it on already. I hope I get to see Sara (and Morlocks) more. She's adorable, with her lisp and all. I'm a sucker for kids. When 'Mistew' Logan gave her a piece of gum, I was all 'awwwww, how sweet'. I also have a thing for Scottish people and their accents. You got it down pat for Moira. I was laughing when she was bringing down her wrath on Ro for not being carefull. Can't wait till you next chapter.

Author's Response: I like kids in stories, too. My own kids give me a lot of material. Sara is of course Marrow; any story with Storm centering around the Morlock tunnels should have some mention of her in it, in my opinion. I also love Moira, she's always been a great supporting character. I have some stories out on Superstories.net with Rahne Sinclair (they are more adult in content, however) that feature more Scottish brogue in her dialogue. Moira may pop up again in this. And the Morlock will definitely be in future updates. There are a handful whom I remember from the Morlocks Massacre storyline and issues of Power Pack. For some reason, I can see Logan grudgingly liking kids.

Ok, I even logged in for this. Brilliant. The moment Ro and Logan shared in her room was sensual, amd natural. Not an easy accomplishment, but you do it flawlessy. *applauds* I am becoming a very big fan, my dear. Like stalker-type fan. ;) Update soon, ok? Oh, and a new KC chapter is up.

Author's Response: I just caught that new chapter, and of course I was over the moon. It was hard to stop those two at just one little liplock, but silly me, I'm trying to write a plot around their encounters...I should just have them have at it on the Danger Room floor, fer cryin' out loud!!! The update may or may not come this week. I'm in back-issue, writer's block hell.