Reviews For Wounded Animals
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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 07:29 pm Title: Bruised

“Discussion’s over"... OMG, yes yes! That was soooo good! Pure RoLo bliss :D Mmmhhh... Loved everything about it. Both their need and want, Logan's determination to do this right, Ro's concern about what was happening, her desire that this (and she) meant something to him... just sooo good :D
"Happy little trees", heh. Despite the tension and sadness in this scene, this made me grin. I think I know exactly what Pete was watching there. Everytime I catch an episode on tv I just have to continue watching it LOL It's so addictive...
Poor Petey though. Especially since Kitty just doesn't seem to get it...
Aww, Logan sure had his fun with the kids. So adorable. I just love him around kids. Mr. Rough 'n Gruff surrounded by cute kiddies. This combination just doesn't seem to fit but that's exactly what makes it even more appealing :)
Huh, now what just happened? Everyone's gone? Where to? Can't wait to find out! Update, update! :D

Author's Response: I love your reviews! I was hoping someone would remember Bob's happy little trees... Kitty and Peter never stood a chance, due to an editorial decision made by Jim Shooter because of their age difference. Yeah, Logan's great with kids. And everyone was taken to Battle World by the Beyonder. That scene with Kitty and Peter reminded me of half the breakups I had with guys prior to meeting my husband. And it seemed to fit here.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 01:35 pm Title: Bruised

I'm loving this story. The Danger Room scene was HOT indeed. When is Kitty going to stop acting like a brat? What happened at the end? I'm sure you'll answer my queries in due time.

Author's Response: Kitty matures pretty soon, and not by choice. The comics convey things differently than the films. Everyone was whisked away into Secret Wars.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-06 - 06:36 pm Title: Bruised

Okay...what gives? Where did they *all* go?!?! Very nice ROLO scene in this one...hot! You know i LOVE this story so don't leave us hanging for long!

Author's Response: They went into that little overhyped back story known as "Secret Wars vol I." I won't leave you hanging long, but I have to dig into UXN.net for issue summaries again. Sigh. I love RoLo love scenes where they have to go through some effort to get out of their clothes!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-06 - 01:01 am Title: Bruised

What! Noooo, don't stop it there!

Thanks for reminding me, I need some laundry detergent.

Author's Response: Laundry detergent - ? Oh, riiiggghhhtt, his shirt smelled like Tide, got it. Was wondering how you got laundry detergent out of this after all the "buildup." (coughs) Glad you tuned in. I will try to update soon.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-19-06 - 12:15 am Title: Bruised

Hmm. I don't do the hot-n'-heavy stuff (much) nowadays, with none of my ongoing fics allowing for it (atleast not in the happy way). Nevertheless, good imagery and great use of words.

Liked the kids in the tunnels. An' looking forward to the next chapter.

BW

Author's Response: Hmmm. I must not be writing it right if you "don't do the hot and heavy stuff," really must fix that... glad you liked the word use. I try not to make things too crude, I didn't want it to read like "Logan turned to Ororo and growled 'I'm gonna butter yer muffin, babe, assume the position!'" Sorry, just me being silly. I'm glad you're still reading this, BW. The Morlock kids were also kind of overlooked back in the day; Leech was the only one who ever had a speaking part, and it was usually to grunt "No powers."

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 10:48 pm Title: Bruised

Oooooh. Steamy RoLo goodness!!! *sigh of contentment* Nice! You, my dear, made my day!

Author's Response: Glad you tuned in. You still have me beat for steam, so I bow to the master. I also love some of your lines like "I have a short list of people I try to impress, Pom-Pom, and surprise, surprise, you aren't on it." That rocked. Still think back to that one...I think you set the bar for RoLo goodness with that story.

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