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Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 05:18 am Title: The Begining

An very good start, update soon. ;)

Reviewer: Nesha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 04:45 am Title: The Begining

you bet your butt I want it to continue...now! Great by the way

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 03:35 am Title: The Begining

ooo, logan is the father right??? more plz, update

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 03:26 am Title: The Begining

I LIKE it. And I would love to see more. Hope you post an update soon.

Reviewer: Jasmine Shigeru Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 02:54 am Title: The Begining

That was good. I want more.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 02:02 am Title: The Begining

Hi.

Interesting beginning. The paragraph formatting got kind of close halfway through, so I might fix that to make it easier to read, use the double paragraph spacing that you have in the first half. Watch a couple of spellings, too; "turquoise, sugary, little, and Rogue" all need fixing.

I'm enjoying this, but I'm wondering if Logan has any suspicions about Ororo's pregnancy? My curiosity is also piqued about whether there is someone else in the picture, from what you have written so far? Keep updating this.

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-15-06 - 12:54 am Title: The Begining

This was a good little story, even with the fast pace.

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