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Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-26-12 - 04:43 pm Title: Who's the father?

Wow! I would never know Ororo to be so callous to a friend, but I'm going to chalk it up to hormones...

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-06 - 06:59 am Title: Who's the father?

MORE! MORE! MORE!.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-06 - 06:16 am Title: Who's the father?

logan got hit!! i feel his pain *cough*! yeh, wot was i sayin? oh yeh, damn that musta hurt! i have to wait till u update agen!! Soo many cliffies!! i cant believe roro cud be so mean to logan although logan kinda deserved it. but i feel sorry for him, whos baby is it?? ororo munroe sleeps with loads of guys?? no way!
next chapter please :D

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-06 - 02:35 am Title: Who's the father?

Whoa! Poor Logan got smacked across the chops! Things are heating up!

Thanks for the thanks, by the way!

There were a few other funny spellings in this chapter, but other than that, you did a good job of keeping Logan in character. "Staring" has two r's in it the way you currently have it written, and "adamantium" is hard to spell for most people, anyway, I think you have it as "adametal." "Alcoholic" is missing an 'o' I think. The paragraph spacing in this chapter is much, much better than the first, more consistent and nice and easy to read, so good job.

Can't wait to see what happens next after Ororo's latest statement! This is getting fun.

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