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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 09:57 am Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

Loved Marie :) She knows exactly how to get to him and never hesitates to make use of it.
Good thing they finally talked... but it didn't make things any easier. Can't wait to find out what's going to come out of this...
Ooh, what's with the little one now?
Damn work keeps me from reading this fic faster, argh! ;D

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 06:30 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

This story is absolutely amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 05:50 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

You can't leave me hanging like that... This is such a good story! I don't blame Storm being pissed off at Wolvie, I still am. I know it's his daughter, but the suspense of Storm telling him is great. Can't wait for another chapter.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 04:31 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

NOOOO!, you can't end it now. Well written, love it update soon. ;)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 02:49 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

Both of these new chapters were beautiful. I like the bits of suspense that you throw into the closing, italic font paragraphs. I'm very addicted to this story. Prita sounds awfully cute. Can't wait to see how she came into Ororo's life.

Reviewer: Ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 02:37 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

Oh Good Lord. This is officially my favorite Logan/Storm story. I'm addicted, I tell you. Can't wait for the next chapter. I *have* to see what happens next. :D

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 01:31 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

YOU NEED TO GO ON WITH THIS... i'll forgive you for blackout for the time being BUT this is amazing!!! It's emotional, insightful and damn beyond interesting.

I need to 4 more chapters this weekend. that's not too much to ask?!

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 01:29 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

first off, WOW. i've only read the first chapter and just...WOW. you were a great writer before, but somehow you've improved tenfold with this one. AND I LOVE YOU. bc now i have three chapters to print off and read at work today! thaaank you kindly :D

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 12:42 pm Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

OMG! As much as I love Blackout, THIS has toppled it. More soon!!!

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 11:10 am Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

again WOW, logan and his thoughts, and Ororo's love for him (unreturned at the time) are so well writen, nither characters come of as weak, they still maintain they're dignity, many writters trying acomplish this tend to make the characters of ro lo change to fit more of a relationship like scott and jean, sappy and cringing.
but you really have nailed it, conveying it whilst mainting the traits of the characters.
and the ending, Ohhhhh, cant wait for an update!

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 11:05 am Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

This is a GREAT start. You've got me hooked. I can hardly wait for the Update. And who is Prita's dad? And will Ororo and Logan be able to forgive each other and work their way back to each other?

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 11:03 am Title: 3. Caught in the Sun

This was heartbreakingly beautiful. I love it. Loved the last chapter when 'Ro and Prita arrived. The ride to the hospital was great. I really enjoyed the teacher's meeting and RoLo taking shots at each other. I was pleasantly surprised when I got two updates this morning. I'm an insomniac, so it gave me something to read to get rid of the boredom. Waiting patiently for more!

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