Date: 06-21-06 - 01:05 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
Logan is soooo adorable with Prita! And now Ro doesn't want him to be around her, aww! Hope she'll come to her senses soon. So stubborn.
The scene outside the club... OMG! :D I wonder what'll come out of that, heh. Gawd, those two...
Date: 06-18-06 - 05:54 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
wow! That was amazingly good..better than ice cream good lol
Date: 06-18-06 - 09:58 am Title: 5. Bad Form
This is such an awsome story. I love every word. Each and every word action scene and thought is done so well. I feel like I'm watching this instead of reading it. Wow! Make that an UBER WOW!!!
Date: 06-18-06 - 05:34 am Title: 5. Bad Form
OMG. That was AWESOME!!! more please! asap!
Date: 06-18-06 - 02:47 am Title: 5. Bad Form
I've had a long day and am very tired. I should be in bed but instead i sat here and read another amazing chapter os this story. so much turmoil. and Prita is so sweet. Toddlers are the greatest (besides that whole pamper bit). 2 down, 2 to go. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
Date: 06-18-06 - 02:25 am Title: 5. Bad Form
dang, i'm still trying to get my mouth shut from that argument...i'm just starin at my computer in shock thinkin', woah...more soon!
Date: 06-17-06 - 11:42 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
Oooohooohooo. *rubs hands together gleefully* more!
Date: 06-17-06 - 11:26 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
Wow, way to go for the jugular, Storm. I am really emjoying this story. You really have a way of telling this story that just leaves me breathless and yearning for more.
Date: 06-17-06 - 08:09 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
Woo-HOO. Pitch perfect angst and very, very sexy. I can picture Ororo dancing out on the floor and the scene outside the club. Brilliant. More, please!
Date: 06-17-06 - 07:33 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
wow! interesting, poor prita is caught in the middle and now evryone knows what has happened between Storm and Logan.... and wot a good way to tell everyone! good chapter! update please :D
Date: 06-17-06 - 07:32 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
WHOA!!!! That chapter was way intense. That argument outside of the club left me with my mouth hanging open. You're right, 'Ro and Logan can be mean. I'm glad your muse is speaking to you, because I can't seem to get enough of this story! Can't wait for your next update!
Date: 06-17-06 - 07:02 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
oh god! things were just getting better
this is truly as complicated as real life, i think everyone knows the, 'do i? no yes hate love' feelings in a relationship lol!
i relate
Date: 06-17-06 - 06:53 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
I've got to say I am so loving this, bloody brilliant. The imagery, the language, I can see everything happening. And something's gotta give is right, even I'm about to snap, lol j/k. Great job ::thumbs up::
Date: 06-17-06 - 06:39 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
Oh, my God. Something has to give, indeed. :D *Great* chapter. The dance and their argument on the sidewalk...Good Lord, I think my monitor melted. And Logan playing with Prita was so great. *sigh* What is it about men (especially burly, manly men) and babies that just sets women off? :D Anyway, continue soon!
P.S. - I think we need to add an option for "Do you recommend this story?" I wanted to put HELL yes!, but it's not one of the choices. *snicker*
Date: 06-17-06 - 06:32 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
OOOHHH!!! this should be good. name calling, yeah that can eb bad. but not wanting someone to spend time with your child? that's just hurtful