[Report This]Date: 06-22-06 - 01:39 am Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
omg what happened?1!?! the ro/gambit fly scene was so cool! friendship is beautiful. glad to hear the resident cajun is ga-ga over rogue :-D
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 07:28 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
I like the way you write Lofan in this story. He is so honest about his feeling for Ro and yet still himself.
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 06:11 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
The flying lesson was fun and Prita is just the cutest :) I really enjoy the friendship between Logan and Scott. It's refreshing to see them like this. Great talk between them! Including the Forge-incident into the picture Ro's hesitation, fear and stubborness is a lot more understandable now.
I really like that Logan asked everyone for help :) Now what did Gambit do?
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 06:00 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
Woohoo! Frequent updates, each one better than the last! I'm totally enjoying this story, Johnny Cash lyrics and all! And little Prita's so darned cute!
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 03:26 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
i loved the insightful scott. he was portrayed differently than a lof of other fics, including mine. I kinda see him in a new light. Very fer fics have that effect. nice job.
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 02:25 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
well from the ending line it seems like gambit is an ass. so many twists makes for a very interesting story by gainee once agen! go u! im waiting for next chapter, and prita's so cute, i luv the relationship between prita and Logan. It makes him seem like a father which i think is pretty cool in this Rolo fic. I think storm is relly stubborn in this, maybe even a bit too stubborn although i undertand the reasoning since u've associated it with her last relationship with Forge. Good idea. Also like the idea bout Scott and Logan being more friendly towards each other and him taking logans side since its a change from other rolo fics. Although i relly cant see Scott smoking cigars, maybe cigarettes :D. I cant believe Gambit! wot an ass! jeez , he was acting so friendly towards logan and then he goes and screws it up! ooo, i wonder what Rogues reaction is gonna be towards this!! *hint* *hint*.
Anyway, good luck with ur next chapter and update soon!
TAM OUT!
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 01:23 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
Loved it again! Nice little backstory on how 'Ro met Remy and Forge. Can't wait to see what Logan does to win 'Ro over and how Remy messes things up. The flying lesson was fun too. Gotta love Rogue. :)
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 12:28 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
What'd the fuckin' Cajun do?!?!? Don't leave me hanging! Gah! Brilliant as always! You are a writing fiend! Bless you!
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 11:55 am Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
Fabulous chapter! Congratulations, you've made me like Scott, and that's hard to do. Loved the flying lesson, loved how far gone Logan is. You're doing a phenomenal job on this. The characters are dead perfect, and your descriptions and narrative never fail to suck me right in. I've read a *lot* of RoLo fics, and this is the best of them all, no lie. :D I will be patiently (well, as patiently as I can when I'm in need of a fix, lol) waiting for the next chapter. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 11:48 am Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
This is priceless, the best RoLo fic I've read in a very long time. Prita is gorgeous and adorable, 'nuff said. And that's saying something 'cause I never really liked babies in the fics.
Johnny Cash's 'I Walk The Line', eh? Chris Daughtry sings it way better, but his might be too rock to listen to when you're working on this fic.
Like I said, it's awesome. I'll be waiting for the next chapters.
[Report This]Date: 06-21-06 - 11:41 am Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
brilliant, i loved it, really cheered me up, made me smile lol!
thanks!
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