Date: 06-29-06 - 07:15 am Title: 14. Renegade
NOOOOO!!! they cant kidnap the hottest character! man thats drama-licious... update soon?
Date: 06-29-06 - 06:49 am Title: 14. Renegade
Loved all the tiny details! Logan trying to put on Ro's shirt in his haste. Ro's slip calling Prita their daughter. His reaction to her leather outfit. The part when he was protecting his hat LOL He'd rather be dropped into the waters then loosing it, heh. ... I think it's details like this that make this story so intriguing :)
Date: 06-29-06 - 03:20 am Title: 14. Renegade
c'est magnifique!
Date: 06-29-06 - 02:55 am Title: 14. Renegade
Brilliant. Gawd, I sound like a Guiness commercial. BRILLIANT I say.
Date: 06-28-06 - 10:35 pm Title: 14. Renegade
Oooh, I love this! You somehow always manage to make each chapter better than the one before it. I don't know how you do it, but damn, I'm jealous. Loved the part where she slipped and called Prita their daughter. *sigh* So perfect. Continue soon! I have to see what happens next! :D
Date: 06-28-06 - 10:05 pm Title: 14. Renegade
It's funny, I didn't know I would get an instant update when I marked this as one of my favorites! I just got the link. Cool!
I like Logan's reaction to her outfit. This story is just fun to read on a lot of levels.