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Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 02:03 am Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles

This is a very good story. It's full of emotion and depth. I just have one nitpick. Your sex scenes are sexy, hot, very well written, and a great plot motivator. However when you write out sounds like "Eeeerrrrgggghh", it takes away from the scene. We get the idea of what kind of noises are going on from your descrption of the scene and the things that they are saying to one another. To be completely honest with you reading those sounds aren't sexy. You do a beautiful job without the sound effects that make me want to laugh instead of blush.

Author's Response: Hi. Nicely worded nitpick. Fair enough observation. Duly noted. I, for one, would rather write out a sound effect than overdescribe the scene with narrative, but that's just me. I'm addicted to sound effects, and laughing at a love scene is not necessarily a bad thing; remember this scene started with Ororo biting her tongue. But thanks for commenting (very usefully, I might add) and leaving a review.

Reviewer: windrider1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 02:57 am Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles

**Fans self...** Oh my. **Passes out**

I'll get back to you when I am...coherent. Beauty of an update, Cee. Well worth the wait. **OMG** Yeah. Whoo boy. Seriously you need to get on another update ASAP. **hugs**

Author's Response: Girl, I'm SO glad to hear from you, and so glad to read that new chapter tonight! Still laughing about the blue agave, since obviously us hedonistic Californians drink that stuff like it was water!!! (well, not me, anymore, but my husband loves the stuff) The next update is in progress, and kicking my behind. Still trying to push a plot, even though it's another fairy tale fic. So sue me, I like the prerequisite conflict and awkward moments, I live for 'em...

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 08:27 pm Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles

HOT! And it's not just the air temperature around here! Great Chapter! *turns on fan* Loved the way you secribed her & his costume. Logan's girlfriend count could have been saved for another chapter when it could have been morre relevant (like when Ororo is mad at him for something). Please, oh please steer clear of the Emma Frost/Wolverine issue i just saw the prviews fro Wolverine origins! Anxiously awaiting an update!

Author's Response: Origins...grrrrr. I saw that preview cover too, both of 'em on Newsarama, and just about lost my lunch. I'm still annoyed by my Assault on Weapons Plus trade that finds Logan "comforting" Emma when she admits "I'm in love with Scott bloody Summers." I hated that frame of that story, I wanted to tell him "unhand that hoochie, now, now, now!" I could have saved his girlfriend list, but I wanted to build a basis of him not wanting to jump into anything too fast yet, even though Ororo is making him rethink that. But excellent point. He won't throw his girlfriend list in her face, but that will lend him some "baggage." We'll see.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 05:17 pm Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles

Mmmmmmmmmmm. Imagine a big satisfied grin plastered all over my face :D Sooo very good! Yum yum...
I dare Emma to pull anything stupid now like trying to get between them! Gah! Loved how Logan contemplated what to do when Emma and Selene approached him LOL.
Nice way to include Vic in this, too, heh :) When he opened the door in nothing but a towel I was like "ooohhhhh yum!". Then I remembered that I was supposed to be on Logan's side here LOL. Oops ;) So, uhm... poor guy. ... but Vic in a towel... damn! :D

Author's Response: You know Emma, she's always trying to pull something stupid...she's still my least favorite X-woman, so I tend to bash her a little in my fiction and write her extra nasty. I thought to myself, if Logan and his friends and enemies from his Weapon X days were in college together, what would they be like? Yeah, Vic in a towel...why not?

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 01:57 am Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles

1. Batman is WAY cooler than Superman
2. I cannot get over how short he is! I try but all i can think about is she can rest her elbows on his head lol
3. Great chapter and the luving was worth writing home about

Author's Response: 1. Yup. 2. Yup. I've discussed that point in messages with my groups before, Logan in the 616 continuity is pretty short. Funny visual about the elbows... 3. Thanks! Hope you like the next one when I have it up.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-06 - 10:09 pm Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles

Whoa...That was freakin' HOT!!!!

*runs off to take a cold shower*

Author's Response: Hee hee hee...I enjoyed writing that one. Mainly for the image of various articles of clothing flying around the room in the dark. These two needed a cold shower after I left them at the ball too long...shame on me.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-06 - 08:55 pm Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles

Hmm. Gooooooodd.

Don't want to write anything else and color the sentiment.

BW

Author's Response: Fair enough (grins). Thanks!

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