[Report This]Date: 07-03-06 - 12:04 am Title: Grilled Like a Flounder, Part One
As always you please and do not disappoint. I love it! Thanks for another great chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. The chapter after this one is somewhat different, and holds much more conflict. But I'm glad you have been reading this so far. Thanks, Kay.
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 09:12 pm Title: Grilled Like a Flounder, Part One
1. Love that you had them getting their hair did and buying hair for it
2. There is a part where you say he "loom over her in the dark" Was Logan with another woman? Cuz I know he didn't lookmover 'Ro...no matter how dark it was
3. Ro shoulda dealt with Emma...her trifling ass I can see playing dirty
4. love the ily but next time let them not be in the throes or after glow of passion
Author's Response: 1. Enjoyed writing about that. So sue me.
2. If he's lying on top of her, which he was (grins slyly), then he can "loom." Very nicely, in fact...
3. Yeah, that Emma's a triflin' ho.
4. I like afterglow confessions, so again, sue me. Sometimes it takes folks shedding some clothes to shed a few barriers, y'know? But yeah, they will have a discussion while fully dressed about their intentions, I promise.
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 08:50 pm Title: Grilled Like a Flounder, Part One
I can't wait to see what happens when they meet each other's parents. I know 'Ro's mom is gonna act a fool! I don't even know what Logan's dad's reaction will be, but I'm patiently waiting to find out.
P.S. I'm gonna save 'Ro the trouble and kick Emma's ass myself. :)
Author's Response: ...someone need to kick Emma's ass, huh? If this were a story where the characters had their powers, I would give Ororo a convenient excuse to kick her butt, but I dunno. Logan's dad's reaction? Still wondering that myself. His stepmother isn't good with subtlety, though...
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 08:14 pm Title: Grilled Like a Flounder, Part One
Charmingly adorable. :D Yuppers, I'm grinning. My word woman, you know how to brighten a day!! :D
Author's Response: I wasn't going for adorable at first. Still stewing away with writer's block. I hit that point with all of my stories before I hit the conclusion, I just reach that point where I get tired of it, and the characters quit talking to me. Glad I don't write for a living...
Glad you liked the chapter, though. And Convergence ROCKS!!! Viva la fanfic!
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 03:37 pm Title: Grilled Like a Flounder, Part One
Damn you! You cut it short just when it was getting good. I can just imagine Emma's maneater smile turn into a grimace after seing Ororo & Logan together! Well i can't wait to see 'meeting the parents'. Don NOT let us wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I'm still writing Part two. Tough chapter, since there is going to be a LOT of conflict stemming from part one and what we've seen of Logan and Ororo's respective families so far. I've been updating this an average of every two days, since that is how long it takes me to come up with what I am trying to say. We'll see...thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 01:46 pm Title: Grilled Like a Flounder, Part One
Now your really starting to creep me out. How did you know I would be spending the day getting ma hair did, too? You should have your own 1-800 number.
I love Logan's allergic reaction to Emma. It craked me up the first time and here it had me reeling again, nice. Ororo paranoia at this realationship is so REAL. Awsomness. Logan'c constant reassuance is so...I can't describe it. Reminds me of my boyfriend. Needless to say, I heart this ALOT.
Author's Response: My own 800 number...now see, you could use that in a line in your next fic. My husband NEVER reassures me of my paranoia, so that's why I write fanfic!!! I'm glad you're still reading this. No anvils, though. Maybe next story!!!
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 07:47 am Title: Grilled Like a Flounder, Part One
Iam enamored with ororo and logan. you have definately captured and created very fun characters. But I do wonder where this is going? obstacles with family and work.I love the scene in the hair dresser. I could relate with the girls discussing everything unfortunately i don't have a hairdresser Im friends with. I wish I had a good hair stylist I guess my friends will have to do
Iam having a hard time visualizing the braids with beads . usually only kids maybe 13 and under wear the beads on the ends.
Author's Response: For some women, their hairdresser is their friend, but it all depends. This chapter was spawned from the one entitled "Please Tell Me We Have Kool-Aid" when Ororo's mom and aunt tell her to grease her hair. I enjoyed writing that one. As for the beads, coulda fooled me. I wear braids on my own hair when I get it braided sometimes, and I'm 34. Go figure. Thanks for reviewing.
As for where it's going, obstacles with friends and work pretty much sums it up. Otherwise, all this story would be about is these two falling into bed. Which might not be bad... ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 06:38 pm Title: Careful with the Hummel
Well, now that I have read this 3, yes 3, times, I can safely say that I never get tired of your writing. Which is honestly the best compliment I can give you, as many times, once is enough for me. Yet, with you and your delicious stories I am drawn into the world you create, become a part of it and each and every time I am reluctant to leave. You, my dear Cee, are quite the talent. I can't wait for another journey into your RoLo world. *hugs*
Author's Response: Well, shucks, make me blush, why don't you! (hugs back) Again, this is high praise from the person whose stories I read over again frequently, reminding myself why they were so good the first time (it's those memorable lines and great character interaction). I'm just glad you like this story, it's one that kind of came out of left field! Now that we've traded some more reviews, go ahead and write some more Convergence!!! I can't help it, I really like that story, your take on Ororo is just so funny and likable.
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 05:05 pm Title: Careful with the Hummel
i can't believe that i was a whole 3 chapters behind *grumbles bout stupid work and school takin up too much time* but dang, i loved thiese chapters...kenyatta had me crackin up a couple chapters ago, but dang the catwoman costume? genius, pure genius...i was so not expecting that...the multiple choice decisions for logan had me laughin, though personally i was goin for 'c'...and 'what would batman do?' still laughin' lol
and now for this chap, it was so cute, liked getting to know logan's family, and i loved the bouquet of flowers..go logan! whoo! caught up no..i'll be waitin for ur next update!
...and oh yeah, i agree, emma is such a heifer!
Author's Response: (chuckles) Yeah, that Emma's a piece of work.And a heifer!!! I liked writing Logan's dad's character, because in the comics, the poor guy never really knows his parents at all.
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 02:48 pm Title: Careful with the Hummel
Okay i CAN"T stop grinning! So sweet & cool! We got to meet Logan's family! I can't wait to see all of the families together! I bet Kenyatta has something to say about how Logan looks and acts around 'Roro. Very very nice! pdate soon!
Author's Response: ...of COURSE she has something to say. Kenyatta is kind of mouthy even on the best of days, but I like her. Ororo and Kenyatta dish at the beauty shop...
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 05:00 am Title: Careful with the Hummel
that was a good update, i like it, but now want more! update soon
Author's Response: In the progress of doing that. This next chapter is trickier to write, because the plot, what there is of it, is thickening. Hope you like the next one.
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 02:16 am Title: Careful with the Hummel
1. This story was a surprise and I'm enjoying it 100%
2. I bet those flowers were taller than Logan lol
3. You remember the part where they dance? How the hell did Logan dip her? As short as he is? lol I will get over his lack of height...eventually
4. Loving the Batman references.
5. Who need plot when there is fluff and a little bit of everything else
Author's Response: This is why you're so much to have around, Kathy, you indulge my insanity! 1. Thanks! 2. maybe they were, slightly...I dunno. 3. He's a brawny guy, I think he managed it okay, and she was wearing flats! 4. Glad you like those. I love Batman, and I wanted to give Logan more backstory. 5. Well, okay then! Viva la fluff!
Date: 06-29-06 - 11:16 pm Title: Careful with the Hummel
Still stewing on the costume caper, but these frequent updates make it all that easier.
Hope you can get another out by tomorrow as I won't be in for the weekend and won't be able to either post or read any new chapies. (Goin' to Toronoto)
BW
Author's Response: Have a nice time in Toronto. If my usual insomnia has its way with me, we'll see. Or my next update may be out by Monday. Who knows?
C
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 02:57 am Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles
**Fans self...** Oh my. **Passes out**
I'll get back to you when I am...coherent. Beauty of an update, Cee. Well worth the wait. **OMG** Yeah. Whoo boy. Seriously you need to get on another update ASAP. **hugs**
Author's Response: Girl, I'm SO glad to hear from you, and so glad to read that new chapter tonight! Still laughing about the blue agave, since obviously us hedonistic Californians drink that stuff like it was water!!! (well, not me, anymore, but my husband loves the stuff) The next update is in progress, and kicking my behind. Still trying to push a plot, even though it's another fairy tale fic. So sue me, I like the prerequisite conflict and awkward moments, I live for 'em...
[Report This]Date: 06-28-06 - 08:27 pm Title: A Buzz, Bunions, and Belt Buckles
HOT! And it's not just the air temperature around here! Great Chapter! *turns on fan* Loved the way you secribed her & his costume. Logan's girlfriend count could have been saved for another chapter when it could have been morre relevant (like when Ororo is mad at him for something). Please, oh please steer clear of the Emma Frost/Wolverine issue i just saw the prviews fro Wolverine origins! Anxiously awaiting an update!
Author's Response: Origins...grrrrr. I saw that preview cover too, both of 'em on Newsarama, and just about lost my lunch. I'm still annoyed by my Assault on Weapons Plus trade that finds Logan "comforting" Emma when she admits "I'm in love with Scott bloody Summers." I hated that frame of that story, I wanted to tell him "unhand that hoochie, now, now, now!" I could have saved his girlfriend list, but I wanted to build a basis of him not wanting to jump into anything too fast yet, even though Ororo is making him rethink that. But excellent point. He won't throw his girlfriend list in her face, but that will lend him some "baggage." We'll see.
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