i love this story and i know this is probably late in the game but i just finished reading it but scott and ro having sex really did it for me , i loved it any more of these two by any chance

This is my first ever fiction -that I can commit to my memory now- of Ororo/Logan. A friend of mine, who's a great fan of this 'ship has got me converted from being an unofficial Jean/Scott to this 'ship. Of course, after she proved to me that this 'ship is great, compliments by your fiction. I'm a Dramione (Harry Potter) fan, and seldom read other fandoms unless I know the author. And I'm quite picky with the ones I read. I can only be ever patient on reading some... child-like written pieces.

I actually liked the plunge into the battefield- or rather, the battlefield start-out of the chapter. I just love such scenes. Since it's my first time to review one of your fics, I think I can have the priviledge of elaborating what I mean.

How you write is simply very picturesque, vivid- the actions, the emotions, and minute alterations in such masques. It helped the story developed further, and I believe, that these little "things" are often forgotten by some writers. (I'm not talking about the technique because it's different.) And it's those little things that make the story worth-while to read for anyone. I suddenly was able to view a part of their soul, and that's saying a lot since I'm just a newbie here.

I liked every chapter, and there was a fluid flow in between chapters. And, my heart fell out to Storm. So sad. Angst. You're really getting me into your story!

Haha. Er, I have to go since I have my chem lq tomorrow which I haven't started studying. I'll read the next chapters when I find the time. :)

~chaste.aeon@gmail.com

You are just on a roll, aren't you. Your latest two stories are just blowing my mind. I haven't even reviewed "To Survive", I've just been trying to catch up. I have been off line for about a week, so now my nights have been filled with playing catch-up...and oh what a glorious game it is. You are just amazing. You capture so much emotion in your writing, once you start reading, you just can't stop. I am on the edge of my seat. Two thumbs waaaayyyy up. This is definately going on my favorites list. :::wink:::

This is good. I'm loving it. Please update soon.

aww, its soo *sniffle* sad :( but i like it :) more please!

Love you and your stories as always! Thanks for gracing us with another one.

This was quite moving. The way that you presented this drew me in. It was as if I was right there with them and seeing everything first-hand. Excellent! Please continue.