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Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

i'm really loving this story, the development is again making it quickly another favourite.
intrestingly enough it was just last week when i found out that stan lee was planning to make magneto and Charles brothers as a final twist at the end of the series, your chapter reminded me of that
anyway great update, loving the story, i always love how u portray them, always keeping their characteristics and improving Ororos someone who i find is not always correctly portrayed, in the movievrse defo
update soon lol

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

I totally love your portrayal of Storm here! The way she talked to Charles and Jean and especially the way she treats Logan, taking no shit from him, no matter his mood :) I was grinning like stupid when he fell down, refusing any help and she just stepped right over him, making herself comfortable on the couch :D
This is perfect, just the two of them in her boathouse. I can't wait until their deep and unique friendship develops into something even more special.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

Perfect is right. Nice update. The nightmare gives me the impression of foreshadowing...do I detect troubled waters for the dynamic duo? I can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

You're so talented. Once again, great story with a lot of realism. Nice turnaround, having Ororo helping him with his rehabilitation. I don't remember much about Wolverine recovering from having his adamantium stripped from him in the comic, except that he was feral. I missed a lot of the comic during that period. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

This was really really descriptive. I could totally picture them just chillin with the beer and veggin out in front of the boxing match.
This is one of the few fics where I really wouldn't mind if thier realationship didn't progress. It's really beautiful just the way it is.
No matter what problems they face nothing could ruin it. Awsomeness!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

Great chapter! *sigh* Loved. Loved the way you handled the thing with Xavier, too. And I can't wait for Storm to get down to business and give Magneto what he deserves. Can't wait for more of this, so I hope you continue soon. And the wallpaper is great! :D

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

I like the wallpaper. I meant to say this in my last review but forgot...I guess Logan is shot :( I love reading the softer and filled with pain side of Wolverine...it makes him human.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

nice insertion of the line about her making a man happy some day...

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-26-06 - 09:29 am Title: Chapter Three: Boxing and Beer

real good update. I like how u handled Jean and Charlie, update soon :D

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