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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-03-06 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

I really don't like to see Ro retreating from everyone including Logan. Especially since it hurts him so much. It might feel like a betrayal on his part to tell the team about Ro's condition but I think it was the right thing to do. He's just too worried to not let the others know about it. Gawd, sentinels. Pain in the ass :) Logan's first mission after quite some time and it sends him right back to the medlab. Great, ugh. If Ro comes back in time to see him in this state she's gonna feel pretty guilty about running away I guess.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

**Is in awe** Brilliant story telling as always. I am enraptured completely by this story. It is one of, if not now, my all time favorites.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

ooooo more!!! that was soo good, what happened to logan????? more please :D

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

This was an amazing chapter. You reminded me that this is more of a friendship fic than the usual kind dripping with romps that are so popular on this site. Yeah, hard not to be frustrated with Ororo and Logan each getting some on the side, but at least they both are. That makes it okay, doesn't it? :-)

Love the action. Love the last line. Love the dialogue and the image of 'Ro driving to beat the band. Good work.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

naughty naughty. i think i like your storm because she's real. Her calm collect exterior makes sense. Awww... Logie's all worried. Again, he had a lot of depth as well.

Reviewer: RO__LOVER79 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

STROM GO A BOOTY CALL ON THE SIDE...YOU GO GIRL...

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

Oh God! Okay, you have to update, like soon. Or I'm gonna go crazy from the waiting. Loved this chapter. Storm's problems and Logan getting hurt on the mission...boy, she's gonna be pissed and probably guilty as hell that she wasn't there. I can't *wait*! Bring on the angst! :D

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

i love it how both wolverine and storm are vunerable but at the same time independant, AND at the same time rely on each other, it incorporates thier character traits so well!
both are victims but refuse to be if you understand. and where as wolverine is being injured physically and needs help Ororo is being injured emotionally. this would usually be the other way around, however you've picked up on the fact that logan has been emotionally hurt before and can deal with it more so than strm, and vis versa for the physical pain, storm is used to dealing with it, where as logans not.

very very intresting, i'm loving the story

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