Date: 07-05-06 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter Seven: Release
that was a good chapter...i feel so sorry for ororo...the guilt she musta felt when erik called her windrider must have been unbearable...and to walk into her house with everyone givin' her dirty looks musta added more hurt...good stuff, i just hope ororo will accept logan's offer to help her heal
Date: 07-03-06 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter Seven: Release
Whoa, what's with Scott? Geez LOL Sure, Ro's behaviour wasn't really the best but still... She always was there for everyone who ever needed her, neclecting herself and her needs in the process. A little bit understanding on their part now would be nice.
Poor Ro, loving and hating someone at the same time, not knowing what to make of it. Especially since Erik doesn't seem to remember much. if not anything. Well, anything expect his Windrider that is.
I'm glad Logan is there for her. Sure he's hurt but she's his best friend. How could he ever be mad at her seing her devastated and confused like that. Good thing she realized that she really needs help now. That both of them need help. Each other's. It's even better that she said it out aloud, admitting it. To Logan and ,most importantly, to herself.
Date: 07-02-06 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release
I understand that everyone was upset with 'Ro for not being there, but they were a bit too harsh IMO. Scott's comments were the worst. 'Ro spends most of her time tending to the needs of others. She deserves the right to have some sort of "Release". :)
Although I do agree that she was being childish, that's how she felt she needed to cope with things at the time. Then to have everyone sitting in her home like they belonged there and like they care about Logan the way she does was kind of self-righteous on their part.
It was an excellent update though. It shocked me that Erik woke up and remembered his "Windrider". Can't wait for more!
Date: 07-02-06 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release
hmmm, next chapter??
i hope a few more people beside logan give Ororo some slack, well even logan.
'where were u?' he didnt have to go on the mission, and it's wasnt Ororo's responsibility to be there ever second, i mean she has done a hell of a lo for him with his recovery. and scott i seriously coulda thumped him
i got a selfish vibe from that chapter, from almost everyone, not so much Ororo iromically even with the begining of the chapter running out, just a lack of compassion
BUT! as you can see i've gone into a full rant lol, reflecting just how much i enjoyed and became absorbed in this chapter LOL
Date: 07-02-06 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release
oh my god!! ororo can be a bitch!! :O!!! poor logan and damn can scotty be harsh. i think the world turned upside down coz even logan was acting nice!
This aint a flame btw, i reckon u wrote the characters very well even tho they acted differently....if that makes sense :D
Altho i still reckon ororo needs a good whack up the head! And someone give scotty an award, he swore!!! I bet thats why psyclocke was so stunned :D
Next chapter please! want more! update soon
TAM OUT!
Date: 07-02-06 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release
Thank you. You just made my day. :D
Date: 07-02-06 - 04:17 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release
THAT WAS GOOD AND ERIK CALL HER MY WINDRIDER..
Date: 07-02-06 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release
Oooh. Loved this. Loved Scott's attitude, surprisingly. And poor 'Ro and Logan. I'm addicted to this, though, just like TS, so i will be impatiently waiting for you to continue. You're a fantastic writer. I don't think I tell you that often enough.