Gah! Ugh... I really didn't see that one coming. Ro/Scott is not as disturbing as Logan/Jean here. Especially since it happened in Ro's house! Bah! Logan's complaining about Scooter's scent on Ro... well, what about her mattress smelling like who knows what now? Gah! They seriously need to get their act together. I'm glad they realized that something has changed between them and actually talked about it. Loved how they sat on the bed together feeling shitty, heh.

Now this was quite unexpected, but not unwelcome. More tension is always a good thing.

I don't know what's up. Normally I love Jean and get pissed off at Scott, but this one's different. Can't help it, though, 'cause she's such an arse here.

*laugh* Excellent!

AHHHHH!!!!!! OMG!!!!! You MUST.... I repeat, MUST update asap!!! Wonderful, and just perfect. You've made my day. :)

This rocks! Everything is so confusing and sexual between the four of them. I just know Jean is up to no good, but I actually felt kinda bad for her (please don't hate me). Ro's all alone for now, but Logan will find his way back to her. I hope a coupla days passes before the next chapter!!

What in hell was she going to do with Scott and Jean’s little mind games in the mean time? Huh? Wasn't she playing a bit of a get back at Jean teenage game herself? As much as that chapter pissed me off, I loved it because it kept the characters human and real. Mistakes are made, often in the heat of turmoil yours or otherwise and the sad truth of it is we are often helpless to stop the outcome even when we plan the action. ;) Good job as always. Full of vivid imagery and emotion. I read the chapter 2 times just to make sure I didn't miss anything because your stories have layers to them. Layers to savor. Mmmmm. Please, please, post the next part of this chapter soon. I'm dying here.