Date: 01-09-07 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
OMGOSH WHAT HAPPENED?! Nooooo they finally kissed and *&%$@#$*&% I thought we were friends, Gainee. sigh Ok I gotta go read the next chapter. My nerves, my nerves. I need a sedative.
Rolletti
Date: 08-28-06 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
OMG, finally!!! ... well, sort of LOL Dammit, who's disturbing now? Gah!
Loved the talk between Logan and Scott btw. So great!
And this:
“Hush,” he quieted her instantly. “I ain’t done yet.”
“Done with what?” she continued, heedless to the tug on her braids.
“Fallin’ for ya.”
“Oh.”
OMG, sooooo perfect! :D
Date: 07-29-06 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
Waaaaah! *yanks hair out* Noooo!
How COULD YOU?! *cries*
I loathe cliffies. Ugh.
But the Logan-Scott interchange was perfect.
Date: 07-29-06 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
Okay, I am REALLLLLLY enjoying this story. I love that you show Storm's wild side and even though some might scream OOC I love that Logan feels and that for the first time he's experiencing fear. Now however I need you to update cause me and cliffhangers are not friends. Thanks =)
Date: 07-29-06 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
ack! wat an evil, evil cliffhanger...great chapter, loved the kiss, and loved the scott/ logan confrontation...but dang, wat an evil cliffhanger...update soon plz!
Date: 07-29-06 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
They kiss! Yes! Perfection. Not sappy at all. Love the dialouge.
Date: 07-28-06 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
i suppose it wouldn't change your mind if i told you I hate cliffhangers? Why stop at such a good part. That's just evil.
Date: 07-28-06 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
Okay, you're leaving it *there*? Not fair, dearie. *Really* not fair. Are you *trying* to kill me? Seriously, loved the chapter. It's about time Scooter and Logan had things out and cleared the air. I am so loving this fic! And you have to continue, like *now* so I can find out what the source of the alarms are. (Though I do have a few guesses. ;))
Date: 07-28-06 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
What the shit? When will these two ever have sex? Even though I'm very curious about what's going on with the alarm system, I still wanted them to have a little more time together.
Very happy that Logan and Scott laid everything on the table, had to be done. Great chapter!!!!!!
Date: 07-28-06 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
You're killing me. Another good chapter as always.
Date: 07-28-06 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wrong moment for the alarms to go off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07-28-06 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooonononononononononoooooo! What the heck happened? Sofregginclose! *Waaaaaaaaah* Oh it better be real important, not like a delivery guy trippin on the alarms....lol
I love how Scott finally admitted the truth, and Logan too. And its gonna be really nice seeing Scott not being a futtbucker anymore doormatting Ro.
I loved it when Logan was like Ro is mine ARRRG nobody else's. For some reason I like that about Rolo, and you do it very well.
Date: 07-28-06 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
can leave it like that
they just got together
hmmm fight scene???? havent had to many of them in this fic
i dont want logan to retire...
so many thoughts... update soon!
Date: 07-28-06 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
Great story you've got going here! Can't wait to hear more.
Date: 07-28-06 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder
Gawdfuckindamnit, Gainee!! Sooooo close! **shrieks in frustration** UPDATE!! SOON!! I will fly over seas and track you down if you don't!