Date: 08-28-06 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
*rolls eyes at Jean* Geez... she's driving me crazy, too! Gah... "I know how rough you can be" Gawd, that woman!
Loved how Logan handled the situation pefectly logan-like, heh :) MMmhhh... *drools*
Loved the race through the city! Especially that everyone enjoyed it immensely, everyone but Jean LOL LOL!
Are Scott and Jeannie still in ther PJs btw? *dies laughing*
Good luck with the move, Gainee! And with the wisdoms... *hugs*
Date: 08-27-06 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
hahahaha. 'oh, shit' is right. Great update. Jean is such a killjoy. Ruining everyone's adrenaline high because she can't handle a little speed.
Date: 08-27-06 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
Hee hee hee. Loved that. All of it. Logan being jealous, Ororo being jealous, Jean being a killjoy, and the closing line. All great. It was worth the wait.
Date: 08-27-06 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
WeeeeeHeeeeeee!!! It's back =) I loved the update and can we scare Jean more? THAT was FUN!!! I hope you can get another one out before you move but if not It's okay, you're still my new favorite author.
Date: 08-27-06 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
That chapter was a lot of fun! Loved the car/bike chase. Loved Logan getting pissed at Jean. I find it hilarious that Scott can't seem to keep his gaze off of 'Ro for too long. Logan's tender musings about 'Ro were so sweet.
Great way to end it, too. "Oh, shit." indeed. LOL!
Date: 08-27-06 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
That was a fun ride! :D:D
Date: 08-27-06 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
Oh my God, I'm still laughing. This was a fantastic chapter, as always, hun. :D Loved the last scene! Hee. And arrested? Uh-oh. Can't wait to see how they get out of this one. Continue as soon as you can, and good luck with the move!
Date: 08-27-06 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth
oh, gawd, now i remember why i love this story so much. high-speed chases, especially involving logan and ororo, have got to be the greatest, and it was friggin' awesome to see scott in on the fun. sadness over the pause in updates but i'll try to be patient!