Date: 02-24-12 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This story was so sad from beginning to end. I swear I cried the last chapter. I was hoping that Wolverine would get his adamantium back. I hoped that her relationship with Magneto would be fixed. I also hoped that she wasn't really dead (like last time). The last paragraph just tears my heart out. I love his devotion. Their devotion. I absolutely adore your work and how you can instill laughter, sorrow and enthusiasm for the next chapter. I like the slight W/J, C/S pairings in there. For some reason, Storm being Cyclops's love before Jean really does something for me. LOL I also like when Cyclops and Wolverine are friends. Is Magneto going to help out with the school? I hope. I'm going to check your stories and see if there is a sequel. I tried to submit this on the last chapter, but the site won't verify the security code.
Date: 05-23-08 - 01:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
A story to break our hearts once more. What's the value in that?
Date: 03-28-07 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
You killed Ro. I don't understand why. Seriously.
Date: 01-10-07 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I don't know if my headache is from getting sick or crying at Ro's funeral. I love your writing, BUT YOU'RE A MEANIE. (stomping foot) NO FAIR RO IS DEAD! Okay, I can't review anymore I gotta read the last chapter before someone make a phone call and I'm carried away in a straight jacket.
Rolletti
Date: 01-02-07 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Hunh. Can't believe I missed a chapter. I think it fits with Logan's character that he would realize that a battle during one war doesn't extend past that event. So that he could still see Magneto as a father figure to his love and extend him the right to vengence (or Raven). Good chapter
Date: 12-25-06 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
“Who’s up for some tin-can-stompin’?”
I AM!
Date: 12-24-06 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
okay, so i don't hate you any more. i'm back to wanting to hug you. looks like we've got quite a battle cooking here! definitely excited for that! and at the end...ororo can...magically reappear? alive? okay, i doubt it. that might cheapen the story anyway. sigh...,well like i said. hugs not hate. :)
Date: 12-22-06 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Amazing. Can't describe it better than that. My eyes
got teary at the description of her funeral and when Logan said his eulogy...that was unbelievably heartfelt and beautiful.
Logan, Magneto, and Mystique. That's a serious ass beating coming up. :-)
Date: 12-22-06 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Yeah, that's it.
Perfectly written. I swear I got teary-eyed while reading this.
Brilliant.
Date: 12-22-06 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
okay. sigh. where do i start? when ro died.... i won't say that i expected it, but from the note at the beginning of the chapter, i knew something big would happen, but now that i think back on it, the sentinels were like the scary monsters hovering in the background the whole time. but this chapter... so poignant, so emotional, so achingly but elegantly written. i think one of those first phrases sum up the mood perfectly: the description of the snow, "specks of white [that] clung like a frightened child." perfect. and now with magneto and mystique in the mix, i get the feeling that i can look forward to some ass-kicking and enraged-wolverine-smackdowns. i can only hope....
Date: 12-21-06 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
You always make me cry with your fics. So sad, yet so beautiful. Why'd 'Ro have to die? I'm anxious to see everyone avenge 'Ro's death. Especially the brokenhearted Logan.
Date: 12-21-06 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
"She didn’t want to be put into the cold earth, alone and confined. Logan had promised her – promised he wouldn’t put her in the dark."
I think my heart droped right there. So touching. And fitting. This is agreat, gainee. Logan's heartache is palpable and the bitterness in him so heartbreaking. **claps wildly**
Date: 12-21-06 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
OMG... y did u have to kill her!!!! *tears*
Date: 12-21-06 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Damn, I need a break... my eyes are blurry, tears still runnin' *sniffs* It's so sad to see her gone. It's even sadder to see Logan like this. He's lost everything with her.