[Report This]Date: 07-16-06 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter One
This was so great. Betsy is really, really funny. I love her use of words like "shite" and Ororo's description of her early morning diatribes as "warbling." The bunny ears song, Ororo's grandma, her bright red shorts...there was too much to even count that made this story chapter so wonderful to read. I love Logan trying not to bend over for a better look!
More Betsy, and more of Jean-Paul, I suspect he will be a riot, too, when you introduce him. I really dig this story! And like Windy said, you are the AU queen! (Windy's the queen of one-liners)
[Report This]Date: 07-15-06 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter One
I like this.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
[Report This]Date: 07-12-06 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter One
ROFL! This story is hilarious so far. I absolutely loved teh way you secribed Keiron and their little adventures together. I can't believe Roro is passing the nice grandson over to Betsy. Love it. Please update Odalisque!
Author's Response: Thank you. :D I didn't intentionally mean for it to be funny, but it happened without my consent. Odalisque will be updated... soon. I promise.
[Report This]Date: 07-10-06 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter One
This cracked me up. This story has a nice chicklit-ish feel to it. And I think it's a nice offset from all the serious stories you've been writing. I couldn't help giggling at some parts.
Author's Response: It'll get it's fair share of seriousness... I think.
[Report This]Date: 07-10-06 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter One
*falls out of her chair* I'm at work. I'm not supposed to be reading this. I couldn't help it. LMAO. That had me giggling the whole way through. I'll leave you a longer review a little later. Maybe there will be an update when I get home. Wink. Wink. Nod. Nod.
Author's Response: I am fun for work! :D Read me!
[Report This]Date: 07-10-06 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter One
Dang girl. This is funny as hell. I can't wait to see what happens next with Grandma, Bets, Ro, and the lady next door. This reminds me of a sitcom. Not any in particular but it has the setup of one. I'm gonna read the next chapter thinking about what's gonna happen in the next episode. :P
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks. I decided it was time I concentrated on some less intense pieces. :D
And in the next episode of Tear You Apart--Ororo contemplates men who use words like Schmuckkästchen. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 07-10-06 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter One
This is an absolute gem. I laughed my butt off and fanned myself and looked for a glass of ice water! Memorable one liners, sexy banter, sexy guy, great friendship dynamic between Bets and 'Ro, and her grandmother was a hoot. Playing tonk, fussing about her hair, telling her not to suck her teeth...you have no idea how many memories of my own family this evoked. Please update this frequently. I'm putting this on my favorites.
Author's Response: My grandmother and great-grandmother are my inspirations for 'Ro's Gram. My grandma, bless her, said that "Good black" line the other day while we were out and about. And I have to thank you for inspiration, too. The family dynamics you showed in your story made me want to post this story even more. :) I'm going to try to update it as much as I can. Chapter Two is halfway done, anyway. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 07-10-06 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter One
See, now, now I have to go listen to SWR. I love that song. i used that line in convergence, because, well, hell, I'd damn near melt if a man said that to me. I really would. (I am wrong in the head, I know). Regardless, another wonderful piece from you! **stands in reverent awe of DT talents**
Author's Response: I haven't gotten to your latest chapters yet. So much reading, so little time. I'm getting there, and be warned there will be much fangirling abound.
No, there is nothing wrong with your head. If there is, then it must be something wrong with mine, too. I would melt, too, if a guy told me that, right into a puddle.
[Report This]Date: 07-10-06 - 06:33 am Title: Chapter One
It took one small joke to spawn a new story. I am in awe. You really DO suffer from tapestry syndrome. Let me bask in your splendor. It's better to be inspired all the time than never inspired at all. Like me. Oh yes, Norma has NICE grandson for Ms. Ororo. She'll forget all about Mr. Sorta Smut Star. J.P. acting fabulous must appear in one of these chapters. STAT! I lurve Betsy. She makes me smile. Baby gravy made me snerk. Gross. *snerks*
Author's Response: What in the name of God is a snerk? LOL.
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