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Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-06-06 - 01:34 am Title: Three

i love kitty and jimmy's relationship, and her smart mouth cracks me up and esp. the uvula tag and oral twister...lol...gee, i wonder how good that food is gonna taste once ororo hears henry's news...

Author's Response: Kitty is a fave of mine, and I really loved her in X3 so i plan to use her a bit. ;)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-06 - 01:18 am Title: Three

I like this, the inclusion of Trask etc, good mix of comics with the movie which makes it much more enjoyable. I'm curious to see what's up with Marie though. She was useless in the movies and even more so without powers. If I thought they messed up Storm then they killed Rogue she was so useless. I know I sound awful but ugh the movies a like bad - really bad - fan fiction. You should've been at the helm!

Author's Response: Read all of your reviews and first **loves** Thank you!! I'm not a big Rogue fan--period, so don't expect too much involving her. (sorry to all you rogue lovers) LOL at me helming anything Marvel. Riiiiiiight. ;)

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-01-06 - 01:41 pm Title: Three

darn..Ro does not need anymore bad new. I think she is in need of a certain french speaking, sweet talker to spice up her life.

Author's Response: Gambit has a cameo. It's small, but there. ;) Hope you like.

Reviewer: Franny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 09:30 pm Title: Three

Wow, I loved this chapter. I hope to read from you soon!!
-Fran

Author's Response: Thanks, Franny!! I hope to have more for you to read soon! :D

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 05:52 pm Title: Three

This story is getting more and more interesting. I have a feeling Trask has sentinels unde his sleeve, doesn't he? And with the new guys fighting for the right to choose the cure, maybe Rogue will run away and join them? Maybe she meets a certain raging cajun *hint*? What are you doing with Magneto and Mysique? I'm sure they also have something to do with all this mess. I looved the exchange between Kitty and Ororo, especially the talk about Logan killing everyone (duck taping them to the walls?!?! ROFL). And more yummy ROLO! I can'ta wit for Logan to teach Ro how to fight! It's gonna be so cool! Update really really soon! Like before friday, please?

Author's Response: I shall try Pnather to get an update done before you head out. I will try hard. So cross your fingers.No Romy. I hate Romy. You will NEVER see Romy in my stories. Just so ya know. They may be a couple, like in winds but I will not romanticize that trainwreck. Ever. **end rant**

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 05:03 pm Title: Three

i really like this sory, cant wait to see where it goes, i'm still getting over the beauty of kingdom come, and hooked on Convergence

i love the line, “My apologies, Forge. We’ve barely taught him to stay. We’re still working on sit and shake.”
that was good, really laughed at that one

update soon!


Author's Response: More coming up. :D Glad you laughed!

Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 04:48 pm Title: Three

Cannot wait for the danger room~!!
What would happen during their fight?...Logan would not really beat her...Lust......
Imagining....

Author's Response: LOL. We'll see what happens. **grin**

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 01:41 pm Title: Three

Ohhhh.... and the plot thickens. ..so much is about to go down and I love the tie-ins with the moive.

Also,I kinda feel bad for Ro. She seems to be running at full throttle and is about to burn out...soon.

Another Great Chapter!



Author's Response: Ororo is running full tilt and as we all know, even she can fizzle. So you're right. Burnout in 3...2... ;) More coming up.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 12:16 pm Title: Three

I'm enjoying this fic so much. I absolutely love the way you write. Trask is an ass. Of course, Hank would stand up for the X-Men. He's too noble not to. Love the Kitty and Jimmy interaction. When will Rogue get some self-esteem and stop trying to change for a boy? Love RoLo! They just make me smile. I can't wait for their Danger Room session.

Great update!

Author's Response: Hank is awesome. Beast OWNED X3. LOL. I mean that. he frikkin' owned all. More story, characters and of course RoLo coming up!! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 09:02 am Title: Three

Trask. Oh, wonderful. I wanna fry that dude's sorry ass. But I do love how Hank pissed him off. It was great.

The Logan-Ororo exchange about her fighting skills was perfect! *grin*

Waiting to see what crazy stuff are gonna happen next.

Author's Response: Crazy stuff on the way! And thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 01:48 am Title: Three

Perfect tie in with the last movie. Brilliant move to protect the mansion. More of this please!!!

Author's Response: More soon, and thanks! I'm glad you like the tie ins. I had hoped they fit and didn't feel forced.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 01:48 am Title: Three

Boooo no more words....fix that, it will be much better :P!

Lotso love


Author's Response: Uhm....oooookay.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 01:08 am Title: Three

Talk about wonderful weekend surprises. This made this day perfect, when it started out unexceptional.

Great pacing, great plot twist, and of course, I love Rahne. I opted to have Dani in my own piece, just because she is my other favorite New Mutant. And she gets a mention in the novel.

Talk to you later. My own update is stumbling along...too many interruptions, arguments, and the usual b.s. Ain't life grand?

CeeCee

Author's Response: Thanks for the corrections you pointed out. ;) Rahne won't be a prominent player in this. THe main characters are pretty much going to be Ro/Lo, Kitty, Jimmy, bobby (some Rogue), Beast and of course badass Trask. Everyone else is there, but not story effective. Hope the wall get knocked down and the writing flows for you!!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 01:07 am Title: Three

Love this! So love it. And I can't wait to see what happens next! Continue soon! :D

Author's Response: Will do. More coming up...soon, I think. Depends. I have another mad/crazy work week. ;)

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 12:39 am Title: Three

at this la belle rouge.... does a certain mutant named gambit work there?

Author's Response: Honest too goodness i never even thought of that, but y'know, i could see a Gambit cameo at La Belle. =) Thanks for the idea!!

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