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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-06-07 - 12:25 am Title: Six

Some lovely wording throughout. And what a tender moment at the end.

Reviewer: Echo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-25-06 - 04:35 am Title: Six

Damn u, Darlin!! I'll have u know, it is after midnight, local time, and i've been up for hours now with my eyes PLASTERED to the laptop screen (and they're quite glazed over, thank you) as I read through each chapter up to this point. I've even been too busy to get to the next one, I haven't left reviews since Ch 1 (sorry, ;)

Geez, I'ma have a REAL hard time getting up for work in 6 hrs!

Argh!!
*Cant...put...beautiful, en...grossing RoLo...story...down..!!*

Author's Response: Ahahahahahaha...lack of sleep serves you right. :P But seriously, thanks for the wonderriffic reviews!!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 01:58 pm Title: Six

Perfect. Great recovery from everything that happened last chapter. There's something so satisfying about Ororo hovering over Logan during his recuperation that always makes me smile (and it reminds me of Gainee's "Walk the Line" when Ororo moved him back to her house). Color me smiling stupidly after reading this. Don't think I'll be able to write anything myself now!!!

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 08:00 am Title: Six

Your story s getting more and more interesting, every time I read an update.!! And I like how Ro and Logan are growing closer!!

Please keep th uUdates coming!!

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 06:35 am Title: Six

oh, that is a devil of a cliff-hanger! please, please, please say you'll give us the next bit sometime soon? although i do understand about the reasons behind the hiatus -- gainee's 'fade' has been pretty damn good. but i can wait to see what's gonna come next!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 06:04 am Title: Six

Wah! Don't run!

*grin* Jimmy and Kitty are just the cutest. And I see a Kitty-Piotr-Bobby triangle coming up. How fun.

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 04:30 am Title: Six

windrider. . .i am a fan. I have read your stories at the yahoo site and now enjoy them here. slow burn is a great tale and i particularly love the tenderness in this chapter.

keep up the great wrting.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 03:49 am Title: Six

OH MY GOSH! it like gets better and better! A KIT KAT JIMMY??!?!?! HELLZ YEAH NIGGA! bring that shit! oh man i have goosebumps. everything is so much better instantly

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 03:40 am Title: Six

WHA....

You, you, you cant end it there. Hmph! I'll just sit here and pretend there's more. So take that!

Wait, I'm not mad. Just desperate for more.

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 03:36 am Title: Six

OoOoOoOo....
[i]“If you’re gonna run,” he rasped. “Now would be the time to do it.”[/i]

Damn cliffhangers! :D

I'm so glad to see the updates in both your stories...more please!

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-25-06 - 10:46 pm Title: Six

There were so many good parts in this. All around great chapter.

I love the relationship between Jimmy and Kitty. Her telling Jimmy that he wasn't the first X-Kid to try and kill Logan was hilarious.

And since you ended on the note you did, you gotta update soon.

Author's Response: I hope to get an update up soon. **crosses fingers** Thank you so much for the review! I adore Kitty and Jimmy as well.

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-25-06 - 10:45 pm Title: Six

Oh and Jimmy's "You people are so weird" just rocks.

And I take full responsibility for your distractioin. *hangs head in shame* You inspire me, what can I say?!

Author's Response: ;) Fade is just too good. LOL. I can't tear myself away.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-25-06 - 10:36 pm Title: Six

WOW. This was a great update!

I love the relationship b/t Kitty and Jimmy. So sweet. Like a sibling bond. It cracked me up that Kitty was checking Peter out. Go Kitty! LOL! And Bobby...Poor Marie. She's gonna be hurt more than she already is.

Of course I loved RoLo. The silent, smoldering stares and the kiss at the end. *sigh* The last line of the chapter has me on the edge of my seat! I keep saying - "Don't run, 'Ro. STAY!"

Can't wait for more. Just beautiful!

Author's Response: More soon. Will she stay or run...hmmm...that is the question. Is it horrible of me to say I am undecided? LOL. I guess we'll find out together.

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-25-06 - 09:15 pm Title: Six

Oh. My. God. You did NOT just end that chapter there. I'm speechless. My husband thinks I'm nuts cause I just screamed "NO SHE DIDN'T!" at my computer.

Hang on. Must collect thoughts...

Ok, things I like about this chapter are way too numerous to list completely, but I will hightlight things.

The way you described Logan's comatose state was awesome. It was abrupt and confused, which was dead on. Ororo's fear is exactly the same. Palpable, confused, and completely against her will.

Kitty and Jimmy...le sigh. Perfect. I laughed out loud at “But I almost killed Mr. Logan,” he protested.

Kitty made a peeshaw motion with her hands, rolling her eyes. “Like you’re the first X-kid to try that.” That was a great moment.

And the last line..."If you're gonna run..." *dead* More. Soon. Please. I will need something to hold onto when they yank my teeth out on Tuesday.

Brava, my darling. A masterpiece of a chapter to an epic of a fic.



Author's Response: **oodles of hugs** You inspire me as well, my dear. You are so awesome. **adoring eyes**

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