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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-06-07 - 12:35 am Title: Seven

I think my favorite part here was Hank. I loved his remark about Logan's language. That was a good conversation, had me laughing.

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Date: 03-01-07 - 06:03 am Title: Seven

I hear that.

Reviewer: Xtina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 05:41 am Title: Seven

Oh gawsh, I love reading, and man, I need a tissue!! I swear, this fic is so good I could cry, I mean, Ororo and Logan? A match made in Heaven, and an undeniable truth, but on an irrelevant note, dangit! I wish Hank McCoy was real, if he taught me whatever he knew, I could probably go to college in 2 years!! Anyway, I love this story, keep up the good work, and you've got a fan in me!!

Reviewer: Ganieewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 09:04 am Title: Seven

Seriously, there is nothing better than waking up, getting a cup of coffee and seeing this updated. *dies*

Hooobo! That love scene was fantastic. It was hot, hot hot! ALso slightly confused, vulnerable, and with promise that it wouldn't end there. Fantastic writing!

Hank just kills me. The exchange between him and Logan was so dead on. I was close to spitting my coffee out once or twice!

'Ro and Logan.../sigh So utterly lovely. The sexual tension was palpable, even in the cold light of day.

Trask...*growls* That guy's creeping me out!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 08:55 am Title: Seven

Ororo and Logan are just too hot for words. You write great love scenes. The morning after was hilarious. Logan couldn't help but tease 'Ro. I found that so funny.

Ugh! Can't stand Trask! I'll wait patiently for Trask's downfall.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 08:01 am Title: Seven

the sentinels? for reals? ooooh. you do have a way with writing sex scenes, how do you do it? (the writing i mean)

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 06:40 am Title: Seven

George Orwell. Very fitting for Logan, really. Made so much sense I nodded my head and repeated the quote a couple of times. That guy's some kind of brilliant.

The RoLo moments were much love, naturally. Warren is adorable.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 06:03 am Title: Seven

Logan still as irritating as hell the morning after...loved it. I can't wait to read where you're going to take them in this story.

The dialouge between Hank and Logan was perfect. I think this... "Me and ’Ro ain’t got no differences.”

“Good Lord, boy, your grammar is appalling.”

Logan cocked him a warning look. “You call me boy one time too many and you’ll have a severe speech impediment after I cut out your tongue.”

“Violence is always the threat by those without the intellect to solve problems rationally.”

“’People sleep peaceably in their beds at night only because rough men stand ready to do violence on their behalf.’”

Henry raised a surprised brow. “George Orwell.”...has got to be my favorite part.


Great chapter. Convergence? Update anytime soon... maybe?

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 04:16 am Title: Seven

Awsomeness. I loved the sorta involintary cuddling. The Trask thing is brilliant. I like the morning after reactions. Everything is spot on.

Keep on truckin' grl!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 03:05 am Title: Seven

Great plot building. Even though I loved the love scene, the dialogues in this chapter were what really held my attention the most. Hank's great in this story, and consistently so. Now I want to see what Logan does to eventually relieve Ororo of her misgivings. I already see them trying to fight against the warm and cuddlies, but I want to see what pitches them forward into them head first. Should be great, knowing you. This has been such a great weekend for updates.

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