Date: 11-06-07 - 12:52 am Title: Seventeen
ok apparently i missed chapters 16 AND 17, so i've spent the last couple days rereading the whole story. obviously i loved it just as much (if not more!) the second time and it's definitely your fault if i failed today's exam. :D
oh, and for the record...if she dies, you never see wolvie again. :P
Date: 11-03-07 - 07:19 am Title: Seventeen
OMG, great chapter.
Storm can't die cause she needs to kick Raven's arse..and poor Logan, he was the one trying to be the voice of reason to Ro - wonder if he still feels that way now seeing what they've done to her.
Date: 10-29-07 - 04:38 pm Title: Seventeen
Ya!!!! Great update.
Date: 10-29-07 - 04:12 pm Title: Seventeen
Damn! You sure know how to throw things at them! Awesome chapter! And a reminder why love scenes just don't belong in the middle of a battlefield.
Date: 10-29-07 - 12:28 am Title: Seventeen
You updated!!!! YES! Okay so let me fan girl about how awesome this chapter was. I love how everyone jumped in to action after the mansion was attacked, I loved that Raven was screwed even after she did everything she was offered in return. I say kill Trask, kill Raven and have everything be okay!
I do have a question though. Are you going with the movie-established that the cure is only temporary? Will the professor show up in this?
Gah! So many questions, please update soon!
Date: 10-28-07 - 06:44 pm Title: Seventeen
OMG!!! You just HAD to stop right there, right? AHH! *pulls at hair* ... omg omg omg omg... *hyperventilates*
Whatever you do, just don't let her die, `kay? Poor Logan! *cries*
Gads, if they don't kick Mystique's sorry ass to the moon and back I will! Serves her damn well she got played by Trask! Gawd, how I hate her right now. How dare she take a shot at Ro? And Hank! She hurt Hank! *pouts*
Trask, he's got the ultimate knowledge in his hands now. Crap. This is bad, real bad.
Great chapter! :D
Date: 10-28-07 - 02:51 pm Title: Seventeen
I love this story. It is arguably my favorite of all your ROLO stories, and in fact any ROLO story. I am so happy and relieved to finally read your latest chapter, which I loved. It was a long drought since you ended the last chapter in a clifthanger.
Only, please don't kill Ororo off because I'm really hoping that you make the ending of this story one of epic porportions and have Ororo stomp the snot out of Raven and keep Ororo and Logan together, who I think have great chemistry.
Keep up the great work Windrider1. I hope to get another great chapter from you very soon!!
Date: 10-28-07 - 03:52 am Title: Seventeen
OMG! WHY?! oh don't kill her off
Date: 10-28-07 - 03:10 am Title: Seventeen
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Don't kill storm...plssssss....I love this story so much, please don't kill storm in it!!
Date: 10-28-07 - 01:26 am Title: Seventeen
Oh no!! That was fan-fucking-tastic!! Left me breathless. Cannot wait for more please post more soon.
Date: 10-27-07 - 06:52 pm Title: Seventeen
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
This right here put the hook in me:
“Me? I’m going to find that bitch.”
Damn, I love 'Ro in this. I always love her when you write her, anyway. And this, too:
“Y’know, most women try to get me out of my pants.”
That was perfectly Logan. I was right there with him wanting to kick Raven's ass from here to next Sunday when she shot his woman. Yeah, she's goin' down!
Date: 10-27-07 - 05:24 pm Title: Seventeen
i got chills with that line about making 'em wish they never crawled outta their mother's womb. good stuff.