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Reviewer: QTFIC Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-07-11 - 08:30 pm Title: Epilogue

I love the interaction of the characters in this story. I loved Logan and 'Ro's playful side coming out in the woods. This conversation while 'Ro was asleep was perfect. Another masterpiece!

Author's Response: Thanks, QT. I see those two as enjoying each other's company when they have room to run around. I can also see him sneaking up on her when she's dozing, and I can see him enjoying the opportunity afforded by her talking in her sleep. I don't think she minded much! Thanks! Glad you liked this one.

Reviewer: Nikira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-12-07 - 02:58 am Title: Busy Signals

This was the funniest chapter ever...lol. It was amazing..i'd like to see more fics where Logan is jealous of Ororo and Scott especially when nothing is going on between them.

Author's Response: *chuckle* Thanks! I had fun writing that part with the massage. I was never much of a Scott fan until recently, but I like rivalry between Logan and Scott whether there is a girl involved or not. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-14-06 - 09:16 am Title: Epilogue

Had to laugh out loud at the mentioning of Clark Griswold's house LOL OMG :D
The scene in front of the fireplace was so sweet. I loved everything about it. Logan talking to her while she was asleep, the part when she woke up, the things he told her while kissing her... well, like I said, I loved everything :D
And Scott making use of his powers without his visor? That's fantastic! Poor guy had to hide his eyes all his life. Sounds like that's just about to change :)

I really enjoyed reading this story, Cee! :)

Author's Response: I just LOVE Clark Griswold's house. That always epitomizes to me the way real Christmas fanatics feel about the holidays, and I think two guys who are heavily into mechanics would decorate a house with lights and go a little too far in the spirit of the holiday. 'Ro and Logan had a lot of interruptions in this story, so they finally got a break.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-14-06 - 08:46 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

That was an awesome chapter! Loved the way Kitty took out Yuriko! Way to go, Kitten :) Ro and Scott did what they had to do to stop the Phoenix. I'm glad they had the chance to talk to the real Jean before she died/left. Oh gawd, Stryker. I'm glad he's dead. Those sick fanatic crazies tend to get on my nerves LOL :) Logan referring to the students as his kids, HIS geeks, was so sweet.

Author's Response: Stryker's a pain in the butt, so yeah, he had to die. At some point, Logan had to soften up, that was the goal of the past couple of chapters. Guy holds too much in, sometimes (grins). Thanks for reading, Steph.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-06 - 05:02 pm Title: Epilogue

Wow...you realize this story needs a sequel right? Right?!? *hint* I absolutely loved the "talk" Ro & Logan shared shile she was asleep. The best way to find out what someone is really thinking. LOVE IT! And loved the way you write up a scene so well that i can picture every moment of it. (btw, shouldn't the kids have found the clothes they left - this requires extra scene). Scott is finnaly in control of his power! He doesn't have to use his glasses anymore! Bravo! And SEQUEL!

Author's Response: I was tempted to have Sam and Dani stumbling over the clothes, saying "whose shorts are these, anyway?" the next morning, but I skipped that. I took your suggestion about Scott and his powers, I thought it was a good one. Guy deserved a break!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-08-06 - 01:48 am Title: Epilogue

1. Let me start off by saying thanks for 13 great chapter—you sure know how to jerk a sista’s chain.
2. I like the Scoot and ‘Ro talk about how they felt at taking Jean down.
3. I do not like how Logan hide away like that from her when the it came for the “talk” just like a man to keep a woman in suspense. I can’t stand men lol
4. Love how Logan found out how Ro felt by her murmurings things in her sleep
5. I think what I like most is how you gave Scott closure...he didn’t go crazy on people and build a bomb like I thought lol
6. Look forward to the next rolo fic and could storm have blue eyes in this one? I’ll even tolerate a short Logan for this one.




Author's Response: 1. I write more chapters lately just for the reviews! Thanks for sticking with it! 2. They needed that talk. 3. Logan did a lot of running in this story. He heard what Jean said to 'Ro, and it pushed him over the edge, and made him have to think. 4. I liked writing that scene, because I could picture it. My husband and I always grumble like that mid-sleep at each other! 5. Scott needed closure so he wouldn't go postal. 6. Yes, Storm's eyes will be blue, if it is comics or ultimate or alternate verse. I like Logan short, though, so sue me...

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-08-06 - 01:38 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

1. "Don’t make Logan smack a bitch" LOL…Does that mean Logan has a strong pimp hand? lol
2. I was at bit surprised at ‘Ro inactivity at thematch she should have gone after Jean and kicked her ass like she should have at the movie
3. Didn’t tickle…love that line that's something i'll always remember about you Cee
4. Stryker-- love how you wrote him, you wrote him the way I imagined a sick bastard would be who think they are “doing” God’s work


Author's Response: 1. blame Windy and Tempest for that line, I have been enjoying their Livejournal icons! 2. Yes, and that was something that got lost in all of the other asskicking that was going on...sorry. 3. that's my favorite. Been using it since I was a kid. 4. Stryker was a hybrid of Claremont's character, the movie character, and every religious fanatic in history. He had his moments when I was writing him that I almost felt sorry for him, but it was fun to make him evil, not just obsessed.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-06 - 11:40 am Title: Epilogue

Stripes it is, then.

*nod* I totally agree. Lovely ending, one that puts a smile on my face. Ororo with Logan, Scott doing fine. It's perfect.

I'll play for solids then, Cyke.

Good job. I loved it.

Author's Response: This was the only way I could end it. I don't always end with a wedding. I like to end with a relationship. Don't know why. It depends on the plot. Scott being alone but "fine" is okay, too. He's always some woman's other half, no matter who writes him, it seems. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Electric_Claws Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-06 - 05:03 am Title: Epilogue

That was sweet azz a.k.a. I loved this one, loved the emotion. Nice job OC!!

On another note, ::can't help but giggle at BW's NON-X3: Unable to Stand::

Author's Response: He stole the thunder from my update...grrrr. Not fair when the review is more noticeable than the story!!! (and it's fine, I respect his opinion, the movie did kinda suck balls). Glad you stuck around to read this. When is your own update?

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-06 - 04:12 am Title: Epilogue

I love this ending. I feel so bad for Scott. He lost one very important thing, but gained something else he's always wanted. Bui I guess in the end he will have to "Make it Work."

*note to self: no more project runway*

Awsomeness as usual.

Reiko pouts at BW's review, but laughs at the funniess of it. Lol "unable to stand"

Author's Response: ...yeah I laughed at that review, too! And Phoenix always comes back, anyway!!! Same time next reincarnation? Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09-06-06 - 03:43 am Title: Epilogue

Hey! You finished it. I didn't read it (except a couple of chappies) but am happy nonetheless.

Why? 'Cause now will (hopefully) get ur bu** onto something more....uh, NON-X3: Unable to Stand!! :p

Author's Response: Sigh. You really hate these X3 fics, don't you????? Bawwww, boo-hoo, sniff... *grin* Yes, I am working on Wounded!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 06:14 pm Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

Ouch! Painfull...I liked the battle it was nice. For an ending...Ororo & Logan should finnaly have taht long overdue talk, and maybe Scott wouldn't need to wear his visor permanently? And tehm something with "x number of years into the future"

Author's Response: I didn't add any number of years into the future in my ending, although I love it when Gainee does that with hers!!!! I took your suggestion about Scott and his visor, to an extent, hope you like it, Ana.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 10:04 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

Awesome. I had hoped for more crazy Phoenix-vs-all but I figure it's much better this way. Thank God, Stryker's dead. Finally.

Author's Response: The chapter was getting too long!!! I wanted more crazy Phoenix, too, but it didn't pan out that way. I need to use fewer villains, next time. Oh, well. Yeah, STryker was starting to work my last nerve, too!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 03:01 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

WOW! This was such a awsome last chapter. What's gonna happen to Jason? What's Logan's reaction to Phoenix clone/Jean Thingy dying. How's he gonna respond once he finds out that Ororo and Scott did it?

I can't wait for the epiloge!


Author's Response: Logan saw it happen, but he was too overwhelmed to want to talk about it yet. That's why he made a hasty exit. Hope you get to read the epi.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 02:13 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

*looking into my crystal ball* hmm...I no likie what i see for the future of the X-Men....something.... *hits crystal ball* something very bad is going to happen...

Author's Response: yeah, something bad kinda did happen...I like writing conflict. Fluff is fun, too, but it would get boring if that was all I brought to the table. Glad you have been reading, Roxx!

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