Reviews For While You Were Out
You must login () to review.
Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 06:50 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Whoa, Scott's coming back? So cool...
And Stryker's actually about to clone Jean. Someone so powerful in his hands, under his lead... damn.

Author's Response: Yup. Magneto had his turn, now Stryker's having his. That was the intent, and it was inspired by Inferno. I miss the old comics...Marvel stinks these days. No creativity anymore.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 03:54 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

ok it's official...u've got me totally addicted....again...i'm lovin' this, u've got me anxiously wonderin' wat's gonna happen next...

Author's Response: half the time, I don't even know what's gonna happen next! Thanks for the review, 'angel.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 03:54 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

ok it's official...u've got me totally addicted....again...i'm lovin' this, u've got me anxiously wonderin' wat's gonna happen next...

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're tuning in, 'angel. I'll be enabling that addiction a little (smiles) with the next chapter, once I finish it.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 12:46 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Scott is coming back...wow i never would have thought about his body being infused with the water and all.

Author's Response: The basic idea I was going for was that Jean didn't kill Scott; she merely tucked him into her pocket for safekeeping, because maybe she knew there was something about to happen that would put him in danger. I want to build on that. Although it will seem farfetched, since this is my first movieverse story.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 11:26 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Oh, I love this. Love, love, love! Awesome job on this and I can't wait for the next chapter! Continue soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Diva! Great to hear from you. Going to try to write more soon.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 08:33 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Is Stryker trying to bring Jean back? Under his control? Damn. How will Hank be able to bring Scott back? And I LOVE the way Roro & Logan lean on eachother for suport. If Stryker brings Jean back that will be over. I also loved Ororo & Logan's musings in this chapter! I so cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this, and yeah, I've got answers to your questions! Bring Jean back? Kinda. Under his control? Definitely. Hank's working on it, I am bending the plot very, very much. Jeannie coming back doesn't have to totally blow Logan and Ororo out of the water, but it will create consequences for different reasons between them...in the movie, Logan didn't want to listen to reason when Ororo said they had to do "what needed to be done." Hint, hint. I hope you enjoy the update, when I write it.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 08:23 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Even tho I knew it was comming, my mouth is still in the shape of "O". DANG LADY! I totally need more. This is like X4 times ten...thusly making it X40. o_O

Any waze more, more mooooooore!

Author's Response: Glad to have entertained you! X4... yeah, us fans should be the one to write that movie! Darn FOX. Darn Marvel. I will write more of this, I promise. Still looking for the plot, but its hiding from me.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 07:31 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Oooooooooh, this is getting goooooooooooooood. (If you couldn't tell by all the 'o's I am excited.) Brilliantly written as always and just as soon as I get off of work, (5 more hours) I will mosey home and add you to my favorites. *grin* You rock--out loud. Or as Ali would say "That shit was slicker than my ass after Mexican on Tuesdays"...

Author's Response: ...so help me, I'm dying with laughter here. You HAVE to use that in your next chapter of Convergence, now, or I will hunt you down. "slicker than my ass..." too funny. Mosey over with updates when you have time again, girl.

You must login () to review.