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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 07:35 pm Title: Red Carpet

I LOVE this!
Ro and Logan acting like kids, so cute! You don't see that often LOL If ever! But it didn't feel out of character or something. Just perfectly right :) Their kiss... oohhh, yum! Poor Henry, heh, surrounded by kids. “DO I HAVE TO SEPARATE YOU TWO??” LOL! Too funny :)
Totally enjoyed reading this chapter!

Author's Response: I enjoyed writing this chapter way too much. For some reason, the dialogue and the tickle fight just jumped out at me from nowhere and demanded to be written. I ripped off the term "purple nerple" from Reiko, she used it to brilliant effect in Schadenfreude first. Bless her little heart! Read her story if you haven't yet.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 10:04 pm Title: Red Carpet

Ask me how much i love it and i would up wordless. I love the cutness between them before it got down to business.

I never did get the effect of a wet willie? Is it really that horrid? lol

Author's Response: The thing about the wet willie is the "ick" factor; it just feels creepy having anyone stick something wet in your ear. Most men hate it. And for some reason, that scene wrote itself easily in my head. So sue me.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 03:32 pm Title: Red Carpet

lol, i loved logan and ororo's chase scene...it was so cute, and the wet willie was sooo funny, absolutely loved this chapter!

Author's Response: ...I had fun typing that as it slipped into my head. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 06:53 pm Title: Red Carpet

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! Really! It's so...Okay so Ororo, the most serious of my favourite characters and mister grouchy himself Logan are acting like 12 year olds! Why does it feel so right then? It's so FUNNY! It's hilarious. I absolutely love this chapter. I love it. I really love it. Okay i will come back when i can write a proper review. *walks off grinning*

Author's Response: Glad you liked this. I just uploaded some more.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 09:50 am Title: Red Carpet

The theory on Scott is brilliant. I never thought of things that way.

Ororo and Logan. *laugh* The cutest thing ever. Even the most powerful mutants act like kids sometimes.

Author's Response: My theory is a little farfetched for me, but I kept wondering as I watched the movie, why would Jean kill the man she loved and then allow the guy she lusted after to kill her??? It was unplausible. Her reasons for killing Scott were never fleshed out at all, so I am trying to work with that here. Ororo and Logan have the kind of friendship, I think, where some horsing around is possible, or at least picking on each other once in a while. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 12:26 am Title: Red Carpet

YOU SAID PUPRLE NURPLE!
OMG I have the image of Hal giving Hugh one, and its making me smile. You so fucking rock. I could see them frolicking in the woods too. SERIOUSLY GREAT JOB! Cant get this grin off, and my face hurts from all the smiling. =)

Author's Response: Hey, I give you full credit for that one, you got me started with it in your last update, I think...I just love that darned word. "Nerple..." it's funny even when you just say it out loud. glad to give you a smile. I listened to that song you sent me, and I was humming the melody all day yesterday, muttering "happiness as the expense of others..." That was SO funny. Keep updating too, you!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 09:17 pm Title: Red Carpet

"their tongues entwined and communed in a secret language that begged fluency by frequent practice"

Awesome, awesome line. I loved this chapter. I can't stop grinning and people are looking at me funny (I'm at work). They're all like "Why are you so happy?"

"Purple nerple."

"What?"

"You heard me." TWEAK!

Your fault if I get fired!! *grin*

Author's Response: ...sure, blame it all on me, I can't even keep my own job!!! I borrowed "nerple" from Reiko, since that's one of my all-time favorite silly words. And yeah, so sue me, I get all wishy-washy with the fancy words when folks get to kissin'. I read too many cheesy Susan Elizabeth Phillips novels and the like. I wanted to be a slush novelist back when I originally went to school. Never happened. Viva la fanfic.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 08:12 pm Title: Red Carpet

Ok, that was sooo funny. I coudn't help but laugh when he called her Sunshine. Little Miss Sunshine...no, i don't think she would like that much.

Author's Response: Hey, it could have been worse, he coulda called her Sprinkles. I had fun using that one. Glad you got to read it!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 07:10 pm Title: Red Carpet

I *love* this! Love it! The whole playground thing cracked me up. And Sunshine? Hee. There's a new one. Can't wait for more, so continue soon! :D

Author's Response: Working on it...slowly but surely. This was harvested from who knows how many relationships that I've had with guys that have tickled me to death, and when I've taken umbrage.

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