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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 05:54 am Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

I love what's building between Ro and Logan here. I hope it'll grow into more.
Jean in Stryker's hands... nothing good ever came out of what that guy touched. I hope Yuriko will turn against him for treating her like that...
Wow, and Scott's really back.
Loved it when Ro told Logan to put him down to catch her instead :D


Author's Response: Yuriko's gonna get up in Stryker's grill. I hated the treatment of her in the second movie, she had no dialogue, no mind of her own, only one really good fight scene, and none of the history between her and Logan. It was a rip-off. The moment between Logan and 'Ro was another one where the spoken lines happened in my head before the plot.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 10:14 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

wow oh wow! I'm just stun..at how you did this. amazing is all I have to say.

Author's Response: I usually suck at plots, but this story came to me quickly for a change. Don't know why. Good to hear from you!

Reviewer: Abby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 03:45 am Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

OMFM YOU CANT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE !!!! AHHHHHH !!!! SO AWSOME !! I HAVE TO READ MORE !! AAHHHH !! Sorry better now update soo Please !!!

Author's Response: hee hee hee...great review. Thanks! I am working on more updates. More angst stuff ahead, but it will serve a purpose. Ro-Lo stuff coming up two, maybe three chapters from this one.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 06:50 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

OH SHIT! What was that? Did the newly reborn Jean take over Ororo's mind? How could she? How could she know about Scott? Woah...And Stryker is paying god again. Hopefully Wolverine will teach him a lesson permanetly this time. But can he really control Jean. Or will she go awry again. Damn you got me really interested in this story now! Oh and did i metion i love it, love it, LOVE IT! Update soon!

Author's Response: Still developing this out a little. Yes, Jean took control of Storm, though neither woman is certain how yet. It has a lot to do with their empathic link and Jean regaining some semblance of her memories with her rebirth. Instead of reaching out to Scott from the "grave," she reached out to Ororo too. I am glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 04:04 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

omg, wow...just wow, i was so not expecting that...i'm speechless, that was an amazing chapter...wow...

Author's Response: glad you were wowed! Thanks for reviewing, angel.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 04:38 am Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

Oh, fwee. That was highly unexpected. But fascinating nonetheless.

o_O

Let's just say I'm gonna just sit here and wait 'til you update again, 'kay?

Author's Response: I did update. Hope you can give it a read soon. Glad you were fascinated. I'm trying hard not to bore anyone if they don't like movieverse stories, but its different than my usual stuff, so bear with me. C

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 12:57 am Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

HOLY BOVINE! That was amazing. I NEED MORE! I dont have any more words... too many updates in one day. There needs to be some coordination, so that not one author gets all my words :P

Author's Response: Holy bovine...ha ha ha. I swear, you crack me up, girl. I enjoy your reviews as much as your stories, and like Windy, you come up with some great lines. Looking forward to that round robin you promised me, and the next addition to WAYW and Schadenfreude.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 11:25 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

FUCKING WHOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!! This is...is....OMG, what the hell, I actually can't find the words. Damn it. It's glorious.
Damn glorious. **Does a jig**

Author's Response: Wish I could see the jig...sigh. Oh, well. Thanks again for tuning in. No purple nerples in this one, but still contemplating the next method of torture for Ororo to use on Logan. More angst coming; things will get worse before they get better.

Reviewer: Jasmine Shigeru Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 09:55 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

Okay that was interesting. I like Scott being back. Can't wait to see where you take that. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Interesting? I hope it was, and I hope you continue to read this, Jasmine. I did update, and I will again.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 08:42 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

Ho-lee crap, what a chapter! And an awesome one at that. :D I am so addicted to this. So. Addicted. I can't *wait* to see what happens next! Continue soon! D:

Author's Response: More angst is what happens next, Logan isn't getting much of a break, and neither is Ororo. I will lighten it up again soon, I promise.

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