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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 08:28 am Title: Prodigal

Loved the banter between Ro and Logan in the infirmary. But then Scott came to and everything went to hell between them. Damn :/ Poor Scott though. He has no idea of what happened. How long he's been out and what Jean did to him... how's he going to react to that? His glasses... I was wondering about that while reading :) Noone ever looked him straight in the eye before and still they didn't notice, heh.
As for RoLo again... I hope they can work this out. They are just so adorable here :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! You know I love your reviews. Scott doesn't have a clue, yet again. Poor guy, yes, but he will eventually grow a backbone. I think...

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 10:33 pm Title: Prodigal

1. It's time i brought back the bullets..no need to call the press for this lol
2.Love the kiss but i kept thinking of her chapt lips and how it must have chaffed his owns
3. Scott is such a pansy.

Author's Response: 1. you're fun, Kathy! 2. her lips weren't that chapped, but it was fun to give Logan some way to blow off what happened and save face after getting caught sucking face again. Can't let him show that he cares too much yet, can we? 3. yea, Scott's a pansy. Boy can't help it.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 12:40 pm Title: Prodigal

Intense! Scott coming back with no powers or complete control is quiet the twist.

I loved how Scott buried Logan with all those accusations and brought out the all the angst, right in front of Ororo. Whooo! Somebody is gonna have a lot of explaining to do.

This was a fantastic update. Moooore please!

Author's Response: Scott is harder for me to write, since he has never been one of my favorite characters, but I thought he was badly used in the movie this time. His powers will come back, albeit differently than before

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 01:16 pm Title: Prodigal

wow, there was so much emotion in that chapter, ororo probably has even more guilty after the accusations than she did before...and once scott figures wat's happened since he's been gone, that won't be too good...

Author's Response: Nope, it won't. The movie didn't do anything with Scott's character except hare off, find Jean, then get killed. Guy can't get a break. Ororo is only one person that he will be angry at, though, trust me!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 08:43 am Title: Prodigal

Ouch. Scott slicing 'Ro up like that. Man, that's gotta hurt real nasty.

Interesting turn of events, really. The whole Ororo-Logan moment, Logan stammering, Scott forcing some words out of Logan, and the bit about Scott not having his goggles. *sigh* I love Peter.

And don't hold back the angst. I live on angst.

Author's Response: I live comic Peter, I didn't like movie Peter so much, because all he did was look pretty and metallic, and only had two lines the whole film, in X2 and X3. So I am drawing from the comics for his character, albeit loosely. I like angst myself, but every now and again, I end up overdoing it. I want Scott and Ororo to talk eventually; there has to be something unresolved there.

Reviewer: Michi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 05:22 am Title: Prodigal

You got me hooked here. Please update this one soon! I'm really loving this. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate your kind words. And I am working on an update.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 03:02 am Title: Prodigal

Oooh. Great chapter! Loved everything about it, and the end! Oh man, I can't *wait* to see what happens next! :D Continue soon!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this. The next one is slowly coming along. I don't pace myself well! Too much writer's block!

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 02:22 am Title: Prodigal

Thank You, i 've been wanting Scott to finally have this conversation with Wolverine..well..it wasn't really and conversation more of Scott yelling, lol. But still i like that chapter.

I was wondering since the med-lab part..hmm, does Scott have his eyes closed?, but i glad you answered my question for me

Author's Response: Glad to have answered your questions. I almost had him come back with his usual problem, but that would have created a different scene altogether, with everyone jumping all over the place, trying to get him back in his glasses, trying not to let him destroy the infirmary...that would have changed the flavor of the story, although I considered it briefly. Scott and Ororo will talk again, too.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 02:10 am Title: Prodigal

Well, even though I just skimmed through the previous chapters, I read this one full....all because you make it just so damn hard not to read ur fics.

Also finished reading the one you mailed over. What about the other parts of it?

'nyways, now that I have read this, I think I'll keep on readin' till the end.

BW

Author's Response: I'm flattered that you picked this up, BW, even though you don't like movie fics, or at least not X3 fics. Reiko nicknamed this story my X4 fic! I will email you the previous parts of Sleepless later today or tomorrow. I'm logging off pretty soon.

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