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Reviewer: Nikira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-12-07 - 02:58 am Title: Busy Signals

This was the funniest chapter ever...lol. It was amazing..i'd like to see more fics where Logan is jealous of Ororo and Scott especially when nothing is going on between them.

Author's Response: *chuckle* Thanks! I had fun writing that part with the massage. I was never much of a Scott fan until recently, but I like rivalry between Logan and Scott whether there is a girl involved or not. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 11:00 am Title: Busy Signals

MMmhhh, steam room :) But yet again, he had to fuck it all up... *rolls eyes at Logan*
Totally loved his reaction seeing Ro giving Scott a back rub, and Scott enjoying every second of it, bathing in Logan's jealousy, heh :)


Author's Response: He hasn't grown up quite yet, that Logan. And yeah, I wanted Scott to get some of his own back in that scene. He needed a break.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-06 - 10:04 pm Title: Busy Signals

1.Whoa...Yuriko wasted no time with Cornelius..I admire that
2 Logan and 'Ro was hot stuff and I loved the fact that he was getting jealous over Scott.
3. Why did Logan have to mess everything up like that? Why can't he get that usless redhead out of his mind?
4. I look forward to seeing how Logan is going to redeem himself becuase i'm sure 'Ro is not going to make it easier.

Author's Response: 1. I wanted her entry into the action to be interesting, and I imagine she would be pretty ticked off. 2. Logan needs to be the jealous one for a change!!! 3. Because he is stubborn, and Ororo will be pretty determined to wash Jean out of his hair. 4. No, she isn't. I love 'Ro for that very reason.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-06 - 02:44 am Title: Busy Signals

i thought jubilee and warren were cute in the kitchen...and i wonder what jason and yuriko have up their sleeves...can't possibly be good...

Author's Response: I wish they had given us more Angel in the movie, but what he said and did was likable enough. Jason and Yuriko will be up to no good. I promise.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 06:29 pm Title: Busy Signals

Woah! Yuriko wants revenege! And damn you, do you have to spoil all those very hot ROLO scenes? With thoughts of Jean no less. Yuck. Acott is somewhat better than the last cahpters. LOVED this chapter!! That Rolo scene was VERY hot, got my imagiantion working overtime. Update soon!

Author's Response: Not so much thoughts of Jean, just her lingering shadow. The thought of those two in a steam room caught my fancy, for some reason. I always picture those two in places with water. An update is pending; I am suffering a slight block again. Sigh...

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 10:11 am Title: Busy Signals

Oooh! Yuriko and Jason are awesome. *grin*

I was waiting for her to bust out during the second movie, but then Logan kinda killed her and I was bummed. But now she's back and kickin' butt!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was bummed, too. Darned Marvel! I love Yuriko in the comics; even though the Rogue series itself was lame, Yuriko was good in it. Glad you are still reading this!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 09:55 am Title: Busy Signals

**Mr Burns hand rub** Excellent, Smithers!

Man that was great!! Loved the massage and steam room scenes, Loved them. Poo to Stryker and Jean. Jason an Lady Deathstrike, eh? Sah-weeeet twisty team-up.

Update again real soon. **bats eyes**

Author's Response: Man, everyone hates Stryker and Jean! (smiles) Deathstrike is one of my favorite villains since her inception. The issue when Spiral created her cybernetics in Mojo's Body Shoppe was intense and had a great fight scene. I thought it was silly that the movie simply made her a mutant with no dialogue at all, they just used Kelly Hu as eye candy. What a waste! And of course Jason Stryker's character was a mess, too. The next update will be harder, I need to figure out where to position my villains. But any time you want to channel Mr. Burns, feel free, okay? ;-)

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 03:46 am Title: Busy Signals

HAhahahaaaaa...the massage and the steam room had me rollin (minus the mention of Jean) and still do. I like the fact that everyone keeps throwing that in Logan's face. I like that fact that her clone-thing-a-ma-jig is here...but

that girl REALLY needs to stay alive or STAY dead. LOL. This reminds me of a grown up X-men like graphic novel. Almost manga-esque.

Awsome flawless job, as usual Cee. I don't think you could disapoint us even if ya tried wearry hard.

Author's Response: Now that's high praise! Manga-esque? I don't read manga, but I love anime cartoons on DVD, I like Yuyu Hakusho and Full Metal Alchemist. Jean will come back, but with different motives than she had before. Logan will discover soon that he needs to let go of the past and embrace the future that is 'Ro. Hopefully...wahahahahaaa.

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