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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 11:31 am Title: House Sitting

OMG, that scene in the kitchen... so hot! Way too short though, but hot nevertheless :) And someone just HAD to come and interrupt things, I was actually waiting for that LOL Otherwise it would have been way too good to be true ;)
Okay, so Jeannie's back, huh? Well, I really really hope her return won't ruin what just started between Ro and Logan. And Logan better not be ruining things himself either! Gah!
Loved the semi-bonding thingy between Scott and Logan. I hope they finally settled things and move on to some sort of friendship. Again I hope the reappearance of Jean won't ruin this.

Author's Response: Haven't decided that yet. I got sidetracked when I wrote the last chapter, and left out any further bonding between Logan and Scott. But they might come to blows later on...just hinting.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 03:02 am Title: House Sitting

i love logan's multiple choice options, they're great and make me laugh...the logan and scott sorta work-in-progress friendship was great, and bobby's ability to pop in at the worst times cracks me up, lol

Author's Response: I've been dying to write some dialogue between Logan and Scott for a while, I don't know why. Thanks for the visit. Glad you enjoyed Logan's thought processes!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 06:03 pm Title: House Sitting

1. marry me...that was terrifc (sp?)
2. Why did that heifer have to come back now? Couldn't she wait until after RoLo was more strong?
3. I'm glad Jean came though that way Scott could stop bitching about her.

Author's Response: 1. Sure, but I don't do windows!!! 2. What might strengthen them is working through their mutual feelings at having Jean back. Who knows! 3. Scott will get more than he asked for. Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 12:58 pm Title: House Sitting

Damn...Divide et impera seems to be Stryker's plan. Won't Logan be able to smell his scent on her? And damn you for intrerrupting another ROLO scene! Ica booy needs some set hours for going to bed & waiking up! I liked the way you kinda settled things between Scott & Wolvie, although i think i would have liked more time for them to buddy up before Jean walked back in. Oh well.

Author's Response: Well, they were in the kitchen! It was meant to kinda build up the tension between 'em before they really admit that they have feelings for each other, instead of just being friends with benefits. What the heck! Yes, Jean is STryker's Trojan horse. Scott and Wolvie aren't done with male bonding yet.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 12:52 pm Title: House Sitting

Oh crap...Jean. I hope Logan *sniffs* out what's going on. I can see this causing a rift in the newly developing RoLo relationship. Poor Scott. I fear his heart may break.

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: A rift? Maybe. Or at least an obstacle. And Logan is pretty astute. So is 'Ro. Remember the method of delivery for Stryker's narcotics from the movie? (winks)

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 08:25 am Title: House Sitting

Hm... Jeannie's back, but then Stryker's been playing around with her head. A lot's gonna happen soon.

*is excited*

Loved the RoLo kitchen scene.

Author's Response: ...I enjoyed writing the kitchen scene, and seeing it unfold in my head! Yeah, a lot is going to happen soon, hopefully. Stryker has an agenda, but so does Yuriko. Someone's gonna get hurt.

Reviewer: Digital Tempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 04:40 am Title: House Sitting

I have finally gotten all caught, and let me just say this story has made my night 110% better. I definitely don't hate you for the end of this chapter. Then again, you can do no wrong in my eyes. Keep it up. - DT

Author's Response: Glad it improved your night; updating it was the only thing I accomplished with my night yesterday! There are so many Jean haters on this site!!! The only time I hate Jean is when she has designs on Logan, which isn't quite the case here. She'll react to him the way she usually does, but not for the same reasons. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 03:57 am Title: House Sitting

Ok now this is the real review. Wowowowowowowowowowow!

This is so what I want an x-movie to be.

Is anyone taking score? Scott two, Logan zero, Ororo zero :(, and fother mucking Jean two arrrrrrrrrrrrrg!

This is amazing. Please please update soon.

Author's Response: ...fother mucking...ahahahaha. Like I said, this story isn't going to focus on Jean, as much as it will on how her death affected everyone, and how they moved on without her. This won't be a fluff piece. I will update when I can, more than likely this weekend.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 02:38 am Title: House Sitting

sorry, got War on the brain. Was looking at a pic of Ellen Page and Ben Foster and thinking hmmm..... My bad.



Author's Response: Kitty and Warren in the movieverse? Yummy. I love looking at Ben Foster in those wings and no shirt any day of the week.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 02:32 am Title: House Sitting

Fucking Jean. Grrrrrr. Ok, ok, I'll relax. i trust ya.... More roLo!! that scene was so hot and too blessed short. I was all panty and whispering "yes, go for it" and then frikkin' War and Bobby ruin it. Damn them. Viva la fanfic, baby!!

Author's Response: Well, it was Sam and Bobby, so we can't blame War. Not this time, anyway. Yes, Jean...sigh. Don't worry, she won't get diva treatment in this story. Viva la fanfic!!!

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