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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 01:10 pm Title: Unwelcome

Ugh, having their worst dream come true... horrible. At least it brought Ro and Logan a bit closer again. Loved the moment when they were just standing on her balcony in a tight embrace. Mmmm, I'm a sucker for moments like that :D
I wonder what's coming next. From Jean and whomever else is out there coming closer. "Jean lay awake, with visions of fire and destruction running rampantly through her mind." ... that doesn't sound all too good ;)

Weee, I managed to catch up! :D

Author's Response: Hey, I enjoy destruction running rampant, so sue me! Of course, I love RoLo running rampant, too, but this wasnt the chapter for that. I wanted it to occur to Logan on some level that he's starting to fall for Ororo for more than surface lust. It didn't work out the way I wanted it yet. I might revise this one day.

Reviewer: DaughteroftheWind Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 09:59 pm Title: Unwelcome

And finish it. LOL Your killing me smalls. Finish it!!

Author's Response: I'm trying...I just have no time, or when I do have time, my muses zip their collective lip. Sucks. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-17-06 - 06:51 pm Title: Unwelcome

1. When I started reading this I wasn't so sure if I got the right story lol
2. Loves Jubes with Warren, she was so sweet
3. That hug was so sweet between them that I wished they could have just put aside their difference
4. sinners ugh? I feel like she is reading some book by some crazy religious extremist Fascist who thinks the only way for "good" to prevail is to kill all the sinners or all the "bad" people
5. carry on I'm loving this although I don't think you'll ever top Wine and Roses for me but that mean you have something to aspire to lol

Author's Response: 1. I had better shape up, then! *grins* 2. Jubes is fun to write. And I like Warren and the fact that he was in the movie. Wish he had more lines in it. 3. Their differences are a hurdle they will need to leap over together. And they will. 4. Stryker WAS a crazy religious extremist fascist who thinks the sinners (mutants) need to be killed for "good" (humans) to prevail. Guy sets a horrible example, doesn't he? Jean isn't exactly herself, let's just say that for now. 5. You always give me something to aspire to, Kathy!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 08:29 pm Title: Unwelcome

Damn. Damn. And damn. I want more! Update soon! (off to read the rest of the updates).

Author's Response: I want to write more, but I have been hindered lately by stress and aggravation that gets in the way, makes too much mental noise for me to hear the characters telling me their story. I hate when that happens. thanks for reading, kid.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 08:51 am Title: Unwelcome

Wow. I hope 'Ro, Logan and Hank start to figure out what's going on soon. I wouldn't want to see the kids harmed because of Jean and Stryker. LOVE Dani and Sam. How adorable are they? Wonderful RoLo moment. Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoy Sam and Dani in the old books, they were great individually or together, and they had a nice rapport. Always wished they would have made them a couple, but they mired Sam in a boring relationship with Meltdown that made me snooze and sneer. Poor Dani never, ever had a boyfriend, which sucked, since she was so cool. Logan and 'Ro and Hank will definitely be the ones to spring into action. Scott will be harder to convince at first...trust me.

Reviewer: digital tempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 01:29 am Title: Unwelcome

All this young love. It's so sweet. :D I couldn't help chuckling when I read this: "What they heck could they have cloned her from in the first place? Cotton balls and an old piece of string? Sugar and spice? Belly button lint?" I loved how everything's all calm with the kids and all and then BAM! you turn the story completely. Excellent. Loving it. :)

Author's Response: If the story was all calm...no one would want to read it! You know me. I like to get a rise out of people. I'm bad, so very bad...slapping my own hand. In the comics, I always wondered how Sinister cloned Jean, when getting Madelyne and Scott to have a kid was such a laborious process! Marvel characters are always so loose with their kids that they didn't know they had and with losing spare bits and pieces of their DNA. It's just shameless! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 12:08 am Title: Unwelcome

I love reading fics about Dani's powers. You and Minisoo do such a good job with her. You should find someone to draw this. I mean common, it already reads better than a grapic novel. So lets see it as one.

Manga-size this grrl. :D

Author's Response: I loved Dani, because I wasn't much younger than her character when New Mutants came out, and I thought she was the coolest thing since sliced bread. Girlfriend could ride a horse, a motorcycle, kick butt, and scare the bejeebers out of people. I try harder to characterize her than any of the other kids in that title. And Minisinoo writes a much better Dani than mine, I love her fics like a fat kid loves candy. Hook me up with an artist! We'll bring the manga, Reiko! Viva la fanfic.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-13-06 - 11:46 pm Title: Unwelcome

Freaky shit going on in the house of Xavier. **cue eerie music** Good update. Looking forward to more RoLo moments. ;) purty please.

Author's Response: Don't worry, she isn't going to go all Linda Blair and start spewing pea soup...not in this chapter, anyway. *cue evil laughter and hand rubbing*. 'Ro's starting to get a clue that Logan isn't just thinking with his nads, give the boy time. He still has to kick some bad guy ass. Eventually. Thanks for visiting. And great chappy on Convergence.

Reviewer: DaughteroftheWind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-13-06 - 10:49 pm Title: Unwelcome

Your killing me smalls your killing me. Keep writing, loving it. enjoying the constant tease Ororo and Logan are going through. Complete it. One thought, give a bit more info on Jeannie. I was a tad confused. Good story well written loving it. More more!

Author's Response: Smalls? Is that from a movie? (totally clueless) Glad you are enjoying it thus far. Sorry I haven't made Jean clear enough to read. All I can say is...she isn't who or what she seems to be. (ever read the Inferno arc of Uncanny X-Men?)

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