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Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-01-06 - 08:45 pm Title: Interlopers

1) I would read this if it were call Marie...and that saying something since I really don't like the girl
2) Thank you for the fluff at the end of this action packed and chapter
3) I'm looking forward to a a crazy Yuriko and a pissed off Wolverine.
4) Scott is going to go crazy when he finds out he has been loving a clone(?)...he will be even more crushed than he was before

Author's Response: 1. I'll take that as a compliment. I hate movie Rogue. 2. You're welcome. 3. Me too. 4. Scott will be crushed, but it will occur to him that he needs to get his life in order and quit pining over her.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 09:00 am Title: Interlopers

Aw, Logan and Yuriko are gonna go insane again. Darn. I like Yuriko. As for Jeannie, you're writing her better than the guys in the movie ever thought her up.

I don't mind unhappy endings. *hint* Jean can go all wacko Phoenix again for all I care (it'd be cool, though). I'm just happy that Ororo and Logan are pretty much aiight now.

Author's Response: None of the female characters got much justice in the films, too little action with their powers, and too much "damsel in distress." Jean's powers and her tendency to not control her emotions make her fun for me to write. I also like Yuriko. She's cybernetic, strong, rich, and educated, but she's a mindless drone in the movie? Hogwash! I love beserker rage fights with Logan!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 03:39 am Title: Interlopers

Damn this was intense in every way. Once again your attention to detail has slapped me in my face and laughed at the red marks it left behind.

And that cliffy, whoooo!

*bows to a master*

Author's Response: Girl, I love ya, and I love your reviews! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 10:37 pm Title: Interlopers

Greenhouse + RoLo = MAGIC!!!!!!

OMG! They are so hot together. I'm happy they were able to finish before the outside world ruined their party. Great job with the dreams, too. I especially loved Logan's.

Stryker, Jean and Yuriko...*huge sigh*

Awesome update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: The greenhouse made sense to me. It's Ororo's domain. The garage was the other likely place, since that is Logan's. The party is just interrupted for a minute. I promise.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 03:23 pm Title: Interlopers

Damn...you just had to interrupt them, didn't ya? Fabulous chapter! And do damn HOT! I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm still sitting on this story. Life has gotten in the way, to the tune of knocking me upside the head. Still working on it.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 02:35 pm Title: Interlopers

Just when I thought I caught up on your story you post an update!
And what an update it is! Hoo boy! *fans herself* Soooooo good! I'm glad their horrible nightmares didn't drive them further apart but had the exact opposite effect instead :)
But damn, someone just had to come and interrupt again. At least this time around they could finish what they started :D *still fanning*
On now Stryker's there... with Yuriko hot on his heels I guess...
Can't wait to read what else you've planned here, Cee *hugs*

Author's Response: *hugs back* I could have gone that route, but I wanted them drawn together, hopefully to beat the nightmares. But Jean isn't done with them yet...oops, leaked the plot!

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