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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-14-06 - 08:46 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

That was an awesome chapter! Loved the way Kitty took out Yuriko! Way to go, Kitten :) Ro and Scott did what they had to do to stop the Phoenix. I'm glad they had the chance to talk to the real Jean before she died/left. Oh gawd, Stryker. I'm glad he's dead. Those sick fanatic crazies tend to get on my nerves LOL :) Logan referring to the students as his kids, HIS geeks, was so sweet.

Author's Response: Stryker's a pain in the butt, so yeah, he had to die. At some point, Logan had to soften up, that was the goal of the past couple of chapters. Guy holds too much in, sometimes (grins). Thanks for reading, Steph.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-08-06 - 01:38 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

1. "Don’t make Logan smack a bitch" LOL…Does that mean Logan has a strong pimp hand? lol
2. I was at bit surprised at ‘Ro inactivity at thematch she should have gone after Jean and kicked her ass like she should have at the movie
3. Didn’t tickle…love that line that's something i'll always remember about you Cee
4. Stryker-- love how you wrote him, you wrote him the way I imagined a sick bastard would be who think they are “doing” God’s work


Author's Response: 1. blame Windy and Tempest for that line, I have been enjoying their Livejournal icons! 2. Yes, and that was something that got lost in all of the other asskicking that was going on...sorry. 3. that's my favorite. Been using it since I was a kid. 4. Stryker was a hybrid of Claremont's character, the movie character, and every religious fanatic in history. He had his moments when I was writing him that I almost felt sorry for him, but it was fun to make him evil, not just obsessed.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 06:14 pm Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

Ouch! Painfull...I liked the battle it was nice. For an ending...Ororo & Logan should finnaly have taht long overdue talk, and maybe Scott wouldn't need to wear his visor permanently? And tehm something with "x number of years into the future"

Author's Response: I didn't add any number of years into the future in my ending, although I love it when Gainee does that with hers!!!! I took your suggestion about Scott and his visor, to an extent, hope you like it, Ana.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 10:04 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

Awesome. I had hoped for more crazy Phoenix-vs-all but I figure it's much better this way. Thank God, Stryker's dead. Finally.

Author's Response: The chapter was getting too long!!! I wanted more crazy Phoenix, too, but it didn't pan out that way. I need to use fewer villains, next time. Oh, well. Yeah, STryker was starting to work my last nerve, too!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 03:01 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

WOW! This was such a awsome last chapter. What's gonna happen to Jason? What's Logan's reaction to Phoenix clone/Jean Thingy dying. How's he gonna respond once he finds out that Ororo and Scott did it?

I can't wait for the epiloge!


Author's Response: Logan saw it happen, but he was too overwhelmed to want to talk about it yet. That's why he made a hasty exit. Hope you get to read the epi.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 02:13 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

*looking into my crystal ball* hmm...I no likie what i see for the future of the X-Men....something.... *hits crystal ball* something very bad is going to happen...

Author's Response: yeah, something bad kinda did happen...I like writing conflict. Fluff is fun, too, but it would get boring if that was all I brought to the table. Glad you have been reading, Roxx!

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-05-06 - 01:34 am Title: Overstaying Your Welcome

If this ending was the ending you were talking about not being suger-coated, it was plently sweet enough for me. *big inhale* The sweet smell of revenge.

The Jean/Phoenix ending was bittersweet. Great that they stopped her before she could inflict damage, but Scott saying that he didn't want to be without her and her reply were sad.

How is Logan going to feel about Scott and, more importantly, Ororo taking Jean down?

Can't wait for the next update.


Author's Response: Jean head never really adjusted to being back, and once her purpose was revealed, there were going to be trust issues, so yeah, she ended up pushing up daisies in the end of this. Couldn't help it. Logan will feel pretty much the same way Scott felt when it was the other way around, in my opinion. They both loved her, that was the only way either of them could save her. Thanks for reading.

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