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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 06:50 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Whoa, Scott's coming back? So cool...
And Stryker's actually about to clone Jean. Someone so powerful in his hands, under his lead... damn.

Author's Response: Yup. Magneto had his turn, now Stryker's having his. That was the intent, and it was inspired by Inferno. I miss the old comics...Marvel stinks these days. No creativity anymore.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 06:36 pm Title: Empty

Ohhh, I like it so far. A lot actually! Hope to catch up soon, I'm so far behind in reading. Can't wait to find out what Stryker's up to. He found hair... hmm... I see a clone coming or something like that. Raised by Stryker, that can't be good. Oh boy... And what did Henry just find?
Loved the interaction between Ro and Logan, especially that he was able to bring her out of her panic attack.

Author's Response: Hi, Steph! I like the thought of Ororo having panic attacks which would make a lot of sense in light of her past, with the claustrophobia and all.

Reviewer: DaughteroftheWind Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-06 - 09:59 pm Title: Unwelcome

And finish it. LOL Your killing me smalls. Finish it!!

Author's Response: I'm trying...I just have no time, or when I do have time, my muses zip their collective lip. Sucks. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-17-06 - 06:51 pm Title: Unwelcome

1. When I started reading this I wasn't so sure if I got the right story lol
2. Loves Jubes with Warren, she was so sweet
3. That hug was so sweet between them that I wished they could have just put aside their difference
4. sinners ugh? I feel like she is reading some book by some crazy religious extremist Fascist who thinks the only way for "good" to prevail is to kill all the sinners or all the "bad" people
5. carry on I'm loving this although I don't think you'll ever top Wine and Roses for me but that mean you have something to aspire to lol

Author's Response: 1. I had better shape up, then! *grins* 2. Jubes is fun to write. And I like Warren and the fact that he was in the movie. Wish he had more lines in it. 3. Their differences are a hurdle they will need to leap over together. And they will. 4. Stryker WAS a crazy religious extremist fascist who thinks the sinners (mutants) need to be killed for "good" (humans) to prevail. Guy sets a horrible example, doesn't he? Jean isn't exactly herself, let's just say that for now. 5. You always give me something to aspire to, Kathy!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 08:29 pm Title: Unwelcome

Damn. Damn. And damn. I want more! Update soon! (off to read the rest of the updates).

Author's Response: I want to write more, but I have been hindered lately by stress and aggravation that gets in the way, makes too much mental noise for me to hear the characters telling me their story. I hate when that happens. thanks for reading, kid.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 08:51 am Title: Unwelcome

Wow. I hope 'Ro, Logan and Hank start to figure out what's going on soon. I wouldn't want to see the kids harmed because of Jean and Stryker. LOVE Dani and Sam. How adorable are they? Wonderful RoLo moment. Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoy Sam and Dani in the old books, they were great individually or together, and they had a nice rapport. Always wished they would have made them a couple, but they mired Sam in a boring relationship with Meltdown that made me snooze and sneer. Poor Dani never, ever had a boyfriend, which sucked, since she was so cool. Logan and 'Ro and Hank will definitely be the ones to spring into action. Scott will be harder to convince at first...trust me.

Reviewer: digital tempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 01:29 am Title: Unwelcome

All this young love. It's so sweet. :D I couldn't help chuckling when I read this: "What they heck could they have cloned her from in the first place? Cotton balls and an old piece of string? Sugar and spice? Belly button lint?" I loved how everything's all calm with the kids and all and then BAM! you turn the story completely. Excellent. Loving it. :)

Author's Response: If the story was all calm...no one would want to read it! You know me. I like to get a rise out of people. I'm bad, so very bad...slapping my own hand. In the comics, I always wondered how Sinister cloned Jean, when getting Madelyne and Scott to have a kid was such a laborious process! Marvel characters are always so loose with their kids that they didn't know they had and with losing spare bits and pieces of their DNA. It's just shameless! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-14-06 - 12:08 am Title: Unwelcome

I love reading fics about Dani's powers. You and Minisoo do such a good job with her. You should find someone to draw this. I mean common, it already reads better than a grapic novel. So lets see it as one.

Manga-size this grrl. :D

Author's Response: I loved Dani, because I wasn't much younger than her character when New Mutants came out, and I thought she was the coolest thing since sliced bread. Girlfriend could ride a horse, a motorcycle, kick butt, and scare the bejeebers out of people. I try harder to characterize her than any of the other kids in that title. And Minisinoo writes a much better Dani than mine, I love her fics like a fat kid loves candy. Hook me up with an artist! We'll bring the manga, Reiko! Viva la fanfic.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-13-06 - 11:46 pm Title: Unwelcome

Freaky shit going on in the house of Xavier. **cue eerie music** Good update. Looking forward to more RoLo moments. ;) purty please.

Author's Response: Don't worry, she isn't going to go all Linda Blair and start spewing pea soup...not in this chapter, anyway. *cue evil laughter and hand rubbing*. 'Ro's starting to get a clue that Logan isn't just thinking with his nads, give the boy time. He still has to kick some bad guy ass. Eventually. Thanks for visiting. And great chappy on Convergence.

Reviewer: DaughteroftheWind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-13-06 - 10:49 pm Title: Unwelcome

Your killing me smalls your killing me. Keep writing, loving it. enjoying the constant tease Ororo and Logan are going through. Complete it. One thought, give a bit more info on Jeannie. I was a tad confused. Good story well written loving it. More more!

Author's Response: Smalls? Is that from a movie? (totally clueless) Glad you are enjoying it thus far. Sorry I haven't made Jean clear enough to read. All I can say is...she isn't who or what she seems to be. (ever read the Inferno arc of Uncanny X-Men?)

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-07-06 - 01:49 pm Title: That Old, Lived-In Feeling…

1. Doesn't the song go that old loving feeling? Did you get this title from the song?
2. I wanna keep Logan if Ro doesn't want him or if she doesn't know what to do with him lol
3. Scott is still a pansy! I'm starting to think its ingrained in him. He has a lot on his plate with "Jean" so he better man up
4. Must you always ruin the rolo high? One minute everything is dandy and rolo are on the same page and than something happen and bam, they are on hte outs again. Cee my heart can't take it lol

Author's Response: 1. got the title at random; wasn't thinking of the Everly Brothers song, but good point. 2. I want him, too. Darn it... 3. He will have to man up, indeed. Eventually he will. 4. Stinker. You know I'm building steam toward the steam, so just be patient!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-07-06 - 08:55 am Title: That Old, Lived-In Feeling…

That chapter was WAY intense. Of course Jean would interrupt a RoLo moment. *sigh* When she asked Logan if he could be the 'good guy', was that the real Jean speaking, Phoenix or Stryker manipulating what Jean said? I'm sure you'll answer that in good time.

'Ro and Logan are too HOT for words. The kitchen and office scenes had me fanning myself, and they didn't even have sex! They are both stubborn as hell, too! I love the push and pull, though. Makes for an entertaining read.

Great way to end the chapter. Can't wait for more of them!

Author's Response: She was harvesting memories of her talk with Logan at Alkali, and acknowledging that little spark of something between him and Ororo, since he's beginning to project his feelings. Logan was the only person who could take Phoenix down before...this will cause issues. Glad you enjoyed the kitchen and office parts! I want each of them know where the other stands.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-06-06 - 03:58 am Title: That Old, Lived-In Feeling…

uh oh, i sense some trouble stirring up around the corner...i'm still trying to figure out wat's really up with jean, cuz somethin is definitely goin on...and dang, wat a way for logan and ororo to be interrupted, ouch...the smurfette line was funny...great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Jean isn't quite Jean. She was kinda cloned by an evil maniac...she's not all she seems. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 07:17 pm Title: That Old, Lived-In Feeling…

Intense, plotty, uber. I feel so sorry for Ro. Stoopihd Logan puttin her through the ringer like that. I hope that something not so crappy happens to her soon.

Jean...hmm why does she insist on stirring up trouble! Boooo. Even clone Jean is no good to Rolo.

More more more!

Author's Response: ...remember the issue of Uncanny X-Men with the Jean Bomb??? That came to my mind when I wrote this story! Ororo will have her moment, I promise. Hopefully several of them...ahem, cough*** And yeah, Logan is starting to wise up and realize what is important to him, and who he really cares about. He might move that along more quickly if he runs the risk of losing her.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 03:02 am Title: House Sitting

i love logan's multiple choice options, they're great and make me laugh...the logan and scott sorta work-in-progress friendship was great, and bobby's ability to pop in at the worst times cracks me up, lol

Author's Response: I've been dying to write some dialogue between Logan and Scott for a while, I don't know why. Thanks for the visit. Glad you enjoyed Logan's thought processes!

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