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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-06 - 12:37 am Title: Empty

CeeCee you wouldn't happen to have the books on tape version of this would you? I'm so far behind in my reading I feel I'll never get caught up and wouldn't that be so perfect? I could drive to work and instead of listening to Fall Out Boy I could enjoy your well written and very long chapters as well as WindRider's. But so far so good, will try my best to finish, may take a bit but I'm looking forward to it.

Author's Response: Darlene! DUDE! You're back! I'm thrilled that you even noticed that I had another piece and and being updated, so take your sweet time and thanks for visiting. And I will tell you right now, read Windy's first; her latest two are fantastic! The book on tape version...that is too funny. Thanks for the smile.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 06:03 pm Title: House Sitting

1. marry me...that was terrifc (sp?)
2. Why did that heifer have to come back now? Couldn't she wait until after RoLo was more strong?
3. I'm glad Jean came though that way Scott could stop bitching about her.

Author's Response: 1. Sure, but I don't do windows!!! 2. What might strengthen them is working through their mutual feelings at having Jean back. Who knows! 3. Scott will get more than he asked for. Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 12:58 pm Title: House Sitting

Damn...Divide et impera seems to be Stryker's plan. Won't Logan be able to smell his scent on her? And damn you for intrerrupting another ROLO scene! Ica booy needs some set hours for going to bed & waiking up! I liked the way you kinda settled things between Scott & Wolvie, although i think i would have liked more time for them to buddy up before Jean walked back in. Oh well.

Author's Response: Well, they were in the kitchen! It was meant to kinda build up the tension between 'em before they really admit that they have feelings for each other, instead of just being friends with benefits. What the heck! Yes, Jean is STryker's Trojan horse. Scott and Wolvie aren't done with male bonding yet.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 12:52 pm Title: House Sitting

Oh crap...Jean. I hope Logan *sniffs* out what's going on. I can see this causing a rift in the newly developing RoLo relationship. Poor Scott. I fear his heart may break.

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: A rift? Maybe. Or at least an obstacle. And Logan is pretty astute. So is 'Ro. Remember the method of delivery for Stryker's narcotics from the movie? (winks)

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 08:25 am Title: House Sitting

Hm... Jeannie's back, but then Stryker's been playing around with her head. A lot's gonna happen soon.

*is excited*

Loved the RoLo kitchen scene.

Author's Response: ...I enjoyed writing the kitchen scene, and seeing it unfold in my head! Yeah, a lot is going to happen soon, hopefully. Stryker has an agenda, but so does Yuriko. Someone's gonna get hurt.

Reviewer: Digital Tempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 04:40 am Title: House Sitting

I have finally gotten all caught, and let me just say this story has made my night 110% better. I definitely don't hate you for the end of this chapter. Then again, you can do no wrong in my eyes. Keep it up. - DT

Author's Response: Glad it improved your night; updating it was the only thing I accomplished with my night yesterday! There are so many Jean haters on this site!!! The only time I hate Jean is when she has designs on Logan, which isn't quite the case here. She'll react to him the way she usually does, but not for the same reasons. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 03:57 am Title: House Sitting

Ok now this is the real review. Wowowowowowowowowowow!

This is so what I want an x-movie to be.

Is anyone taking score? Scott two, Logan zero, Ororo zero :(, and fother mucking Jean two arrrrrrrrrrrrrg!

This is amazing. Please please update soon.

Author's Response: ...fother mucking...ahahahaha. Like I said, this story isn't going to focus on Jean, as much as it will on how her death affected everyone, and how they moved on without her. This won't be a fluff piece. I will update when I can, more than likely this weekend.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 02:38 am Title: House Sitting

sorry, got War on the brain. Was looking at a pic of Ellen Page and Ben Foster and thinking hmmm..... My bad.



Author's Response: Kitty and Warren in the movieverse? Yummy. I love looking at Ben Foster in those wings and no shirt any day of the week.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 02:32 am Title: House Sitting

Fucking Jean. Grrrrrr. Ok, ok, I'll relax. i trust ya.... More roLo!! that scene was so hot and too blessed short. I was all panty and whispering "yes, go for it" and then frikkin' War and Bobby ruin it. Damn them. Viva la fanfic, baby!!

Author's Response: Well, it was Sam and Bobby, so we can't blame War. Not this time, anyway. Yes, Jean...sigh. Don't worry, she won't get diva treatment in this story. Viva la fanfic!!!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 02:06 am Title: Empty

I haven't read it yet, and I KNOW its gonna be damn good :P!

Author's Response: Now see, that's why we get along so good, you stroke my inflated ego!!! Luv ya, girl. C

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-06 - 10:04 pm Title: Busy Signals

1.Whoa...Yuriko wasted no time with Cornelius..I admire that
2 Logan and 'Ro was hot stuff and I loved the fact that he was getting jealous over Scott.
3. Why did Logan have to mess everything up like that? Why can't he get that usless redhead out of his mind?
4. I look forward to seeing how Logan is going to redeem himself becuase i'm sure 'Ro is not going to make it easier.

Author's Response: 1. I wanted her entry into the action to be interesting, and I imagine she would be pretty ticked off. 2. Logan needs to be the jealous one for a change!!! 3. Because he is stubborn, and Ororo will be pretty determined to wash Jean out of his hair. 4. No, she isn't. I love 'Ro for that very reason.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-06 - 02:44 am Title: Busy Signals

i thought jubilee and warren were cute in the kitchen...and i wonder what jason and yuriko have up their sleeves...can't possibly be good...

Author's Response: I wish they had given us more Angel in the movie, but what he said and did was likable enough. Jason and Yuriko will be up to no good. I promise.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 06:29 pm Title: Busy Signals

Woah! Yuriko wants revenege! And damn you, do you have to spoil all those very hot ROLO scenes? With thoughts of Jean no less. Yuck. Acott is somewhat better than the last cahpters. LOVED this chapter!! That Rolo scene was VERY hot, got my imagiantion working overtime. Update soon!

Author's Response: Not so much thoughts of Jean, just her lingering shadow. The thought of those two in a steam room caught my fancy, for some reason. I always picture those two in places with water. An update is pending; I am suffering a slight block again. Sigh...

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 10:11 am Title: Busy Signals

Oooh! Yuriko and Jason are awesome. *grin*

I was waiting for her to bust out during the second movie, but then Logan kinda killed her and I was bummed. But now she's back and kickin' butt!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was bummed, too. Darned Marvel! I love Yuriko in the comics; even though the Rogue series itself was lame, Yuriko was good in it. Glad you are still reading this!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 09:55 am Title: Busy Signals

**Mr Burns hand rub** Excellent, Smithers!

Man that was great!! Loved the massage and steam room scenes, Loved them. Poo to Stryker and Jean. Jason an Lady Deathstrike, eh? Sah-weeeet twisty team-up.

Update again real soon. **bats eyes**

Author's Response: Man, everyone hates Stryker and Jean! (smiles) Deathstrike is one of my favorite villains since her inception. The issue when Spiral created her cybernetics in Mojo's Body Shoppe was intense and had a great fight scene. I thought it was silly that the movie simply made her a mutant with no dialogue at all, they just used Kelly Hu as eye candy. What a waste! And of course Jason Stryker's character was a mess, too. The next update will be harder, I need to figure out where to position my villains. But any time you want to channel Mr. Burns, feel free, okay? ;-)

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