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Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 03:46 am Title: Busy Signals

HAhahahaaaaa...the massage and the steam room had me rollin (minus the mention of Jean) and still do. I like the fact that everyone keeps throwing that in Logan's face. I like that fact that her clone-thing-a-ma-jig is here...but

that girl REALLY needs to stay alive or STAY dead. LOL. This reminds me of a grown up X-men like graphic novel. Almost manga-esque.

Awsome flawless job, as usual Cee. I don't think you could disapoint us even if ya tried wearry hard.

Author's Response: Now that's high praise! Manga-esque? I don't read manga, but I love anime cartoons on DVD, I like Yuyu Hakusho and Full Metal Alchemist. Jean will come back, but with different motives than she had before. Logan will discover soon that he needs to let go of the past and embrace the future that is 'Ro. Hopefully...wahahahahaaa.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 08:12 pm Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

ROFL! And aww...Very very nice. Scott and Ro are friends again. Very very nice moment, i got steamy eyes. (or is taht misty eyes? anyway,) Sorry for cutting this short but i have tons more updates to reda. Update soon! Oh and ia m still SOOO loving this story.

Author's Response: Yeah, misty! Glad you could read this. And I am happy that you like it.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 03:05 pm Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

it's good to see those two patch things up and have scott decide to come back and attempt to live life...and henry's remedy was too funny

Author's Response: My aunt Tim put onions in my socks once when I had a fever. I went to sleep one night and woke up with onions in them, wondering why my feet felt lumpy. Ororo and Scott will have more opportunities to yank Logan's chain.

Reviewer: Michi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 02:16 pm Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

I love how Scott and 'Ro finally patched things up. It's good to see the two of them regaining that friendship. This was a great chapter.

You're really doing great because your writing is just amazing and I just can't get enough of it. Hope you update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, this review made my day! I think it would be hard for Scott to live among the people who killed the woman he loved, but they would owe it to him to explain why. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 07:32 am Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

*blinks*

Wait, let me reboot my head for a bit. That was quite an emotional overload (not that it's a bad thing, though).

Amazing.

Author's Response: Needed a reboot, eh? (grins) The emotion was high on my mind this time, I don't know why. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 02:04 am Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

Nice update. I really like this story immensely. you talented devil you. I hope you update soon, and I am enjoying Scott once more. :D Yay. Deep yet heartwarming. Good stuff!!

Author's Response: Scott will have his ups and downs. Folks either love him or hate him, poor guy...glad you like it. It's been speaking to me, or maybe that's just my meds!!! Scott just traipsed off and got himself killed with, like, no closure at all in the movie. That really blew. I intend to fix that!

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 10:36 pm Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

it was nice, can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks, Rox. Trying to make this somewhat plausible and readable. Hard work, whew! Hope you will keep reading.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 09:49 pm Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

Nice, comforting, and intriging. I wanna know wa'sup. Not a long enough chapter! :P

Author's Response: 'Ro's got enough on her plate without Scott hating her guts. Glad you liked this.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 08:52 pm Title: Prodigal, Part Two – Lost, and Then Found

1. What a pansy! That is why i dislike Scott Summers.
2. I did like him for a brief moment (in the movie) when he told Logan where to go plus the actor was looking mighty fine with that beard.
3. I don't want no Scott and 'Ro going on..okay? I can't take being conflicted over Scott or Logan.
4. Scott's eyes are blue? I remember reading somewhere that they were brown i think.

Author's Response: 1. hey, the guy just came back from the dead! cut him a little slack...? 2. yeah, I liked him with the beard. He'll be shaving off his stubble against hearty protests next chapter! 3. No, no Scott and 'Ro, but expect Logan to get a little jealous at their renewed friendship. 4. In the movie, they are dark blue; in the comics, they are brown. James Marsden is handsome, so Scott in this story will look like him.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 10:33 pm Title: Prodigal

1. It's time i brought back the bullets..no need to call the press for this lol
2.Love the kiss but i kept thinking of her chapt lips and how it must have chaffed his owns
3. Scott is such a pansy.

Author's Response: 1. you're fun, Kathy! 2. her lips weren't that chapped, but it was fun to give Logan some way to blow off what happened and save face after getting caught sucking face again. Can't let him show that he cares too much yet, can we? 3. yea, Scott's a pansy. Boy can't help it.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 10:14 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

wow oh wow! I'm just stun..at how you did this. amazing is all I have to say.

Author's Response: I usually suck at plots, but this story came to me quickly for a change. Don't know why. Good to hear from you!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 10:04 pm Title: Red Carpet

Ask me how much i love it and i would up wordless. I love the cutness between them before it got down to business.

I never did get the effect of a wet willie? Is it really that horrid? lol

Author's Response: The thing about the wet willie is the "ick" factor; it just feels creepy having anyone stick something wet in your ear. Most men hate it. And for some reason, that scene wrote itself easily in my head. So sue me.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 12:40 pm Title: Prodigal

Intense! Scott coming back with no powers or complete control is quiet the twist.

I loved how Scott buried Logan with all those accusations and brought out the all the angst, right in front of Ororo. Whooo! Somebody is gonna have a lot of explaining to do.

This was a fantastic update. Moooore please!

Author's Response: Scott is harder for me to write, since he has never been one of my favorite characters, but I thought he was badly used in the movie this time. His powers will come back, albeit differently than before

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 01:16 pm Title: Prodigal

wow, there was so much emotion in that chapter, ororo probably has even more guilty after the accusations than she did before...and once scott figures wat's happened since he's been gone, that won't be too good...

Author's Response: Nope, it won't. The movie didn't do anything with Scott's character except hare off, find Jean, then get killed. Guy can't get a break. Ororo is only one person that he will be angry at, though, trust me!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 08:43 am Title: Prodigal

Ouch. Scott slicing 'Ro up like that. Man, that's gotta hurt real nasty.

Interesting turn of events, really. The whole Ororo-Logan moment, Logan stammering, Scott forcing some words out of Logan, and the bit about Scott not having his goggles. *sigh* I love Peter.

And don't hold back the angst. I live on angst.

Author's Response: I live comic Peter, I didn't like movie Peter so much, because all he did was look pretty and metallic, and only had two lines the whole film, in X2 and X3. So I am drawing from the comics for his character, albeit loosely. I like angst myself, but every now and again, I end up overdoing it. I want Scott and Ororo to talk eventually; there has to be something unresolved there.

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